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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Over and over Your face in my head Keeps me spinning round Trying to hold on steady To keep from falling down Lost you once were, Thought your soul was gone Tossed into an endless ocean Never allowing time for The slow crush of emotion I suppress the urge The most basic desire To express what I feel So with furtive glances These moments I steal Watching you flower With tender care Like a bloom in spring From a seed laid dormant Is such a wonderful thing Love comes to heal, To strengthen you And to purify I watch as you grow wings And soar into the sky |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Absolutely gorgeous write, soft and gentle caress of words. I'm keeping this one in my library. Another touchdown..... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Touchdown, as Kacy says; but touched, indeed, by the beauty of your spirit to lift one other. This is grace, and giving... and love. Beautiful, and regardless of who reads it, they will know it was for them. |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
Lovely i really like what you are writing |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Watching you flower With tender care Like a bloom in spring From a seed laid dormant Is such a wonderful thing Love comes to heal, To strengthen you And to purify I watch as you grow wings And soar into the sky This loving appreciation of another's growth is exhilerating... and yes... wonderful. *S* Absolutely beautiful! |
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