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WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2009-05-13 12:25 PM

Just Fall In Love

If you felt something the first time you met,
If you felt it more the next time,
And if it keeps getting stronger each time you see each other,

If you feel like; although you have only known each other a short time,
you feel like a piece of your heart would be torn out and lost if they were not part of your life,

If being with them brings the warmth and comfort and security like has never been felt before,

If just the touch of their hand in yours,
makes you tremble,

If saying goodbye is the hardest thing for you to do,

If you are happier being with them,
than without them,

And,

IF, all the "What if's" and "Who knows"
       Doesn't matter more than the burning in your soul,

Then,
       Just Fall In Love.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-05-13 12:39 PM

Yo WTBAKELAR,

Well, that's very nice. It would sound a little better if that "doesn't" was a "don't".

BTW, nice silver star you've got there.

Bobby

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

2 posted 2009-05-14 02:01 PM

Tracey, I look forward to reading your poems, they have so much meaning. I am so proud of you.

Love Mom

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

3 posted 2009-05-14 02:29 PM

well said wtbakelar

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2009-05-14 03:37 PM

Written in truth and straight to the point meaning. Well done.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-05-19 10:03 AM

And hope that they fall, too! *S*

*sigh* Ah, well... when the Ka-THUMP is a lonely one, at least all views are looking up! LOL

Loved this! *S*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-05-21 05:46 AM

Of course at that point, it has already happened and there is no return to "what ifs" ...

Good advice, falling in love is the best treatment we can gift us with ... every other "illness" simply disappears magically.

Loved this, Tracey.

Love,
Margherita

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

7 posted 2009-05-21 06:36 AM

Very nice and romantic, you certainly are in love !
Heart2Heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2009-05-21 02:08 PM

Oh, my! I think I just did! lol

Linda

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

9 posted 2009-05-26 09:52 AM

Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments,
I hope you all have had the opportunity to feel these things, and have fallen as deeply as I.

Love you all,
Tracey.

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