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Margherita
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0 posted 2009-05-13 04:15 AM




***

love skips on moon’s face
consciousness reveals beauty
hearts vibrate in joy

***

dreams cruise the night sky
in search of deeper meaning
to enlighten life

***

dawn smiles through your eyes
energy moves across veins
love incites action

***


© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2009-05-13 04:39 AM


smileeeeeeeeeeee

It's like you wrote a three step program to achieving happiness.

but then, you do that.



thank you

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-05-13 04:40 AM


Thank YOU dear Karen ... either you are up early or ... cruising the night sky with open eyes!
Hugs.
Margherita

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3 posted 2009-05-13 04:45 AM


I'm just glad I'm up.

The stars are most spectacular t'nigh-mornin'.



Shine on, crazy diamond.

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-05-13 06:34 AM


Thank you Karen for restoring the firmament! I went nuts with those atars!


M

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2009-05-17 06:30 PM


I don't know how I missed these but I'm glad I found them, Margherita.
                                   Ida

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6 posted 2009-05-17 08:12 PM


I like the idea of "Dreams cruising the night sky".

Rick A. Delmonico

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-05-17 08:25 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

This is a very lovely picture poems combination.

Love Bobby

Margherita
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8 posted 2009-05-18 03:11 AM


Thank you, dear Ida, for deeming this one worthy to be unburied from oblivion.

Thank you, dear Rick and dear Bobby, for your loving comments.

Love and enjoy a beautiful week.
Margherita


Billie Cullimore
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9 posted 2009-05-19 03:31 AM


I am a hugging person and this lovely poem inspired a hug, Do you mind? I'm hugging you right now.
Billie C.

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10 posted 2009-05-19 09:06 AM


Margherita,

You write with a gentle pen.

Love,
Alison

Kaoru
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11 posted 2009-05-19 09:12 AM


There's no moving forward without action in love. Beautiful writing.
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12 posted 2009-05-19 09:43 AM


ms mar......you do love such sweet justice, enjoyed you ms
Margherita
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13 posted 2009-05-20 03:33 AM


Thank you, dear Billie, dear Alison, dear Kaoru and dear DS for your loving replies.

Sharing my little morning reflection with you:


drops of love ripple

tunes upon crystal soul ponds

smiles arise from depth



Love,
Margherita  

Mark Bohannan
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14 posted 2009-05-20 01:42 PM


Beautiful trio you gave us and that last one holds a beauty all it's own.  It is easy to tell you understand it and hopefully live each and every day of your life.
Heart2Heart
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15 posted 2009-05-20 02:16 PM


Credit comes where credit's due, these Haikus are both beautiful and incredibly well written.
Heart2Heart

kindredspirit
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16 posted 2009-05-20 04:35 PM


a beautiful write.  
Bill Charles
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17 posted 2009-05-20 06:04 PM


Margherita - a'hhhhh, the moon is surely my weakness...

BC

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18 posted 2009-05-21 02:37 AM


a real bliss Margherita, such beautiful truths, thanks for sharing this well crafted poem.

yann

Margherita
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19 posted 2009-05-21 07:00 AM


Thank you all my dear Poet friends, Mark, Heart2Heart, kindredspirit, Bill, Yann, for your generous and kind replies.

Love,
Margherita

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20 posted 2009-05-21 02:21 PM


...and your poetry, my dear Dolphina, incites love in those of us privileged to read your cosmic love poems!

You truly must write with an angel quill pen!



Angelo Terrestre/Lunare

Margherita
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21 posted 2009-05-21 06:25 PM


Grazie Angelo Terrestre! I am so happy you are back. Your energy of love and your brightness are intensely missed when you are not around!
Love and hugs.
Margherita

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22 posted 2009-05-21 06:59 PM


Absolutely C O O L!

Especially like the first....

j.

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23 posted 2009-05-21 07:43 PM


I like the middle one. I really like the middle one.
Earth Angel
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24 posted 2009-05-21 09:38 PM


Grazie, Maga Margherita! I feel exactly the same way when you are away from these pages of blue!



Angelo Terrestre

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25 posted 2009-05-21 10:20 PM


What a lovely picture and wonderful haikus!
You always bring gentle, kind, peaceful thoughts to the readers at Pips.
Dearest lady, it's a great honor to post on the same site as you.

Margherita
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26 posted 2009-05-22 07:25 PM


Thank you so much, dear Jimmy, dear Osprey, dear Linda and dear Kacy! Your words caress my heart.

Dear Kacy, the honor is all mine!

Love and hugs.
Margherita


Bloodline
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27 posted 2009-05-28 09:26 PM


Margherita,
A trio of enchantment and visual
to invite the touch of the moon muse,

Bloodline

Margherita
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28 posted 2009-05-31 12:35 PM


Thank you, dear BL, for your loving reply.

Love,
Margherita

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