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Longing for Ghosts
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Longing for Ghosts |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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My lover is a ghost in my mind Oh how I yearn to touch Sending wishes across time and space For the ache is becoming too much Soft kisses from her breath Brush my lips in parted pose Out to the dreamless night My thoughts of her goes My loneliness is measured in miles Sundered from her presence Skin screams for salvation Which pays my penance Burning with desire to melt In the heat of her whisper A caress of a soul’s energy We share in the transfer |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I kind of felt like this was how you feel when you're getting so so close and it never peaks. Good write. |
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AlluraD Junior Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 28Florida |
Across the miles, through the wires maybe....yearning for the tangible.. that ache clear in your words~ |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Allura...thanks, the ache is sometimes to be appreciated. Kaoru...curious as to what you meant about getting close, and never peaking? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Burning with desire to melt In the heat of her whisper Yearn this intense should bring breathing substance to ghosts... or make flesh and blood female lose all breath. *S* Beautiful work! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you very much Ruth. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"My lover is a ghost in my mind" ~ and the possibities could be endless and be anything that you could imagine them to be.  I do so enjoy your poetry, CG.  EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
CG? I think I know what Kaoru means. It's like waking up before you get to the "money shot"...  But of course, your description is much more romantic and poetic. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The ladies are right on...what feels so good is sometimes so far away, that we will never touch it, that only the memory, or thought of the possibility, can suffice. Your love knows, CG; and may it always be so. Wonderful write. I've a lot of catching up to do with all of my wonderful poets to read.  |
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