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ILoveTheRain
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0 posted 2009-05-11 11:11 AM



Fiery depths within the soul

Cast temptations of self-destruction.

The carrier of the soul, timid with fear

Smoothes the blade over her flesh.

She can’t put it down, won’t put it down.

Anger rising throughout her bare body.

Lying in the bathtub, water running.

Deep in thought, curiosity of the other side

Adrenaline running through her veins

Images casting out all of her emotions

She throws the blade across the room

Takes a deep breath…

And slowly submerges herself

Under water, Undead.

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1 posted 2009-05-13 08:20 PM


Yes, it's best to toss the blade away, have the courage to live and embrace the beautiful moments of life. Welcome back to the blue pages.

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2 posted 2009-05-14 12:45 PM


indeed, but too, dont cast all emotions aside, it's what makes you who you are...

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I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

Rex
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3 posted 2009-05-14 12:52 PM


I too love the rain as well as the wind and storm tossed seas! It's best she tossed the knife or she couldn't see the beauty of nature. Well done.

Regards.

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