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rad802
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0 posted 2009-05-10 11:35 AM


This interface by Rick Delmonico

This interface
This coarse visage
does not paint my soul

all the color's still remain
the palette left out in the rain

This deafness
This hard quiet
does not sing my heart

the melodies somehow remain
circling round inside of my brain

This software
This tattered page
does not speak my mind

Some information will remain
all this poor vessel can contain

Rick A. Delmonico

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1 posted 2009-05-10 11:59 AM


"all the color's still remain
the palette left out in the rain"

A powerful metaphor if I do say so myself. Well done, and enjoyed.

Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
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2 posted 2009-05-10 03:35 PM


yeah . i know what you are saying. i like this. maybe one day you will spill ya gutts and we will love it,.... I dare ya!! ?
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