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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2009-05-09 11:08 AM


A Gentle Misting From The Heart
By Paul Wilson

Weep… sweet love let your tears fall
like the rains ofyesterday
You touched my heart long ago
in your special way

The time for letting go is now
even thou it’s hard too say goodbye
We loved each other with all our hearts
giving hope to each other you and I

We’ve traveled near and far
you always by my side
Special dreams shared with only you
feelings of love we couldn’t hide

When rain begins it’s gentle misting
think of all the fun we had
Remember the love we shared
please don’t be sad

Close your eyes and I’ll be there
in your mind and heart dear
I’ll be your guiding light
when your path thru life is not clear

You seem so far away
just out of reach but always in view
Keep my memory in your heart forever
what I’d give to spend one more day with you

I’ll catch all your tears
and keep them in my heart
Till we are together again
never too part

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

© Copyright 2009 Paul D. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
zaxby
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1 posted 2009-05-10 06:55 PM


yes this has many hallmark moments but the feeling is heartfelt and true for one loved for so many years enjoyed.
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2 posted 2009-05-10 11:24 PM


Such a tender render of the heart.
Reads like prayer, and then some.

Lovely poetry, Paul Wilson~


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3 posted 2009-05-11 12:28 PM


Paul - my goodness, what a beautiful caring write my friend. Hope you're well...

BC

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4 posted 2009-05-11 03:55 PM


Such a sad tone... written so beautifully! *S*
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5 posted 2009-05-11 05:57 PM


Paul, your poetry is a reflection of the truly caring, sensitive man you are.

Sending a loving hug your way,

Linda

Paul Wilson
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6 posted 2009-05-12 07:32 AM


Thanks all for your tender replies.
Just trying to get back in the mood to write, it's been a few months since i've written anything, except monthly bills LOL
Again thanks...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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7 posted 2009-05-13 04:38 PM


Dear Paul, I love the gentle flow of this melancholic poem, it displays your heart so lovingly.

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2009-05-13 05:51 PM


I really liked it
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9 posted 2009-05-13 06:19 PM


Paul - I know the feeling. Only when you've walked that walk can you talk this talk. Much Enjoyed. Namyh
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10 posted 2009-05-13 11:42 PM


there is such a sweet nostalgia to this...almost like you can hear the music playing in the background once you start reading...nicely done
Paul Wilson
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11 posted 2009-05-14 07:42 AM


Thanks so very much to all, you have touched me with your tender replies and caring hearts. Perhaps I can do what I love soon and start writting again...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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