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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-05-08 04:27 PM





        


She wanders through the Labyrinth of thoughts, of dreams; of hopes, of fears.
A whisper on the winds of my imagination... to appear
unbidden;
when I least expect her... murmuring her soft demand;
and she... a stern, and jealous Mistress; bending me to her command.

She, who is called... Muse.


From whence she came, I have no knowing... nor how long she may remain;
nor then, can I guess her humour, when she comes to me again.
Will she bring bright hope of love, or sadness of a love mislaid?
Or, bitterness of love confounded?
Venom of a love betrayed?

She, who is called... Muse.


If bitterness, or venom, be it; then... in truth, I shall defy;
for that is not my way; not from my pen, will thoughts, corrosive lie.
The path I seek is softer... gentler...
love, as it was meant to be;
there is rhyme enough... and more;
of selfish, shadowed misery

from She, whom they call... Muse.


But, for such defiance... then, her retribution will be swift;
tantalising thoughts... impossible to rhyme, will be her gift;
or, perhaps a sensual, honeyed web of thought, that can, but lead
to mangled couplets; ruptured rhymes...
something, that I do not need

from She, they would call... Muse.


She is a stern, and Jealous Mistress; but in truth, she will return
after she has ransacked all the Labyrinth... resolved to learn
where it is, that lie the sweetest memories,
safe tucked away;
but these are not hers for the taking, in this complex game I play

with She, who is called... Muse.


She whispers on the winds of my imagination, all the while.
But, will it bring to those who read...
soft memory?... A tear?... A smile?
A wistful smile, perhaps... for something lost, but still, sweet memory?
A smile of hope, for something, yet to come?
Tears for what could not be?

This then, is She who is called... Muse.



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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2009-05-09 06:48 AM


My muse and I seldom agree
on the content of our poetry.
She leans towards spirituality
while I must dwell in the reality
she seeks to rise above.
My practical curiosity is endless,
her concerns are truth and love.
With each write we must decide...
Do we fly with the wings
of a wren or a dove?
My muse and I have a somewhat turbulent
relationship sometimes. I loved the look at you muse.
                           Ida

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2 posted 2009-05-09 11:56 AM


"A wistful smile, perhaps... for something lost, but still, sweet memory?"

enjoyed this

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3 posted 2009-05-11 02:42 PM


But, will it bring to those who read...
soft memory?... A tear?... A smile?
A wistful smile, perhaps... for something lost, but still, sweet memory?
A smile of hope, for something, yet to come?
Tears for what could not be?

Or all, in their own times...

If your muse becomes offended and leaves your for a while, we'll all lose... Excellent write!!

Kaoru
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4 posted 2009-05-11 03:35 PM


"She is a stern, and Jealous Mistress; but in truth, she will return
after she has ransacked all the Labyrinth... resolved to learn
where it is, that lie the sweetest memories,
safe tucked away;
but these are not hers for the taking, in this complex game I play"


Again, beautiful work!

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2009-05-11 08:41 PM


this is so nice and so personal yet universal to poets
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-05-11 10:46 PM


...SAVED faster than I can say "Muse"!!!

Dear POET, this is fantastic writing. Absolutely phenomenal! It's being tucked away in my trove of treasures about muses, poets, poetry and the writing of such!

Signed:
A Fan


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