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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-05-08 01:22 PM





oh godiva in your nearly gownless gauze
how you tempt the demons to ride their dragons
and to fly above the depth of your gaze
where they are but leaves from darkened trees
and you bash your bashful blush like china

there at the morning stone's moaning comma
from castle whim I know your somber
when sighs are your souls saturation
and then you consummate your ear wounds
with ipod canned seal unsealed secretions

you stir the trembling of the ripple ended waters
and your thighs in dance skin are cricket wings
how can sighs not seduce even the stones
when you let the lady of your glamour
get her knees wet in dawning meadows

while she preys her knight to slay him slowly


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2009-05-08 01:27 PM


to read you is to quench
the thirst of desert parch

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-05-08 01:44 PM


To read you means to open and contemplate totally new poetic horizons. You are truly amazing, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-05-08 01:54 PM


Ms slick, you smile my man thoughts with your comments.
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Ms mar thank you for looking in this window.


Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2009-05-08 01:54 PM


You're making me want to go outside. Stop it.
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-05-08 02:05 PM


ms K..ok...maybe I should rename it to coveting trees in flip flops?  thanks lady
unboundpoetess
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6 posted 2009-05-08 07:10 PM


I love the way
you have your way with words, stroking each syllable until you draw a sigh.

H

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2009-05-08 10:13 PM


Oh my, I love the bash of bashful blush like china,
and the lady of your glamour!!  

You are so in rare form, slick!!!


Sunshine
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8 posted 2009-05-08 11:02 PM


Slow is good...
to read this slowly is
to tremble beautifully within
the gaze of coventry.


Osprey
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9 posted 2009-05-09 02:07 AM


Hands up from me, Dark. I've tried, but you lost me somewhere just above her gaze.
I must be in thick mode.

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2009-05-09 06:42 AM


UBP, thanks so much lady!!


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ms bluesy, thanks brat, you smile me still


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ms sun, thanks special one


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oz..modern day godiva..that is the "thin" of it

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11 posted 2009-05-10 12:00 PM


Is she made of chocolate?  
Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2009-05-10 07:00 AM


ms ali-san...

more caramel I suspect...thanks babe

Spuddette
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13 posted 2009-05-10 04:01 PM


oh husband I accept your tolls
though scantily flawled
yet beg you to repent
your greed
and accept my hairy cause.

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2009-05-11 09:39 AM


ms spudd'  

and the knave
that you bid to shave
and leave your forest floored
will he not weep with crave
when only your steed trots the pave
and the sire is your souls adore

steavenr
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15 posted 2009-05-11 02:50 PM


this is all so good, but I found these lines speaking to me:

"while she preys her knight to slay him slowly
sighs are your souls saturation
you stir the trembling of the ripple ended waters"

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2009-05-11 03:29 PM


thanks amigo!!
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