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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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forgotten An ancient grave on a barren hill of crawling shadows, by this road no longer traveled... A leaning stone in fading script admonishes simply … poet, romantic, fool of no great matter. --- b. e. adams (5/7/2009) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very melancholic and poignantly rendered, dear Bruce. It's not a projection of your sadness I hope. And though I will admit that poets can be fools, I would never think that any poetic thoughts might be considered "of no great matter". Even a tiny thought wrapped in poetic words can change the world. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Though those stones speak volumes, those who listen and interpret the message in their own way. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Most of the poets I know are romantic but few are fools and many poets have, indeed, changed the world (maybe the universe) with their words. Ida |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
imagining the words are of the occupant's own design... enjoyed this! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I like poetry that I don't have to close my eyes to see...that which rolls off the panorama of a sigh...sighing deeply to give my heart's eye time to focus...very well done...excellent write |
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