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MissAnnonymous
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Derbyshire, England

0 posted 2009-05-07 05:41 PM


Seventeen,
Fear,
Too scared to try.
Collision?
Scared I'll die.
Expense,
Not got a job.
Impatience,
Takes too long

Eighteen,
Curious
Wondering.
Affordable,
Now working
Freedom?
Do what I want, when I want.
Independence
Don't rely on anyone

Computer test
Finish first
Have a rest
Easy
Pass

One
Too fast approaching
Too far to the right
Not enough observing
Fail

Two
Different place
Too far to the left
Too fast - It's not a race!!
Fail

Three
Still, approaching too fast
Confident
Try again? No way, this is the last
Fail

Four
The head of centre
Strictest - oh no!
Perfect Manouvre
Pass

Drive
Buy new car
Drive some more

Nineteen
Four and a half months
A lifetime left
Confidence
Fast lanes  
Independence
Wind in hair
Far away places  
Freedom
Driving,
Love it.

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1 posted 2009-05-07 05:42 PM


Man, oh man. I wish I could love it too, and I'm almost 25! I have reasons, don't worry, but I've always wished for the wind in my hair... driving always spelled freedom to me. Great work.
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