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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Fusion *** Whatever direction I take my steps are synchronized with my heart’s intuition. They steer me closer to you, closer to the final destination, right into your open arms, where our lips will seal in an immortal kiss of bliss. I lean in full trust into the winds of destiny which gently push me forwards upon the heavenly paths where your strokes of wings raise magic clouds of stardust, sticking like instant glue to my shimmer thirsty skin. Crazy love particles twirl through the dark night sky with only one vital desire displayed in flashing signals in the mirrors of your eyes: “wait not, just light my fire!” Upon our successful collision we collapse into a wild free fall. In willing capitulation to nature’s compelling call we blaze through space in deep eternal fusion, as if on a bright comet’s trail, melting the ice of ages in the furnace of our sun souls. *** |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Blazing... and brilliant! *S* Beautiful write! *S* |
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AlluraD Junior Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 28Florida |
Wow.....and I rarely say that!! *s* I love how the poem moves so confidently to it's destination... we blaze through space in deep eternal fusion, as if on a bright comet’s trail, melting the ice of ages Incredible lines and emotion...great write~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
remarkable Marherita, the poem took me and didn't let me go until I read it...Fusion is a well orchestred metaphor with brilliant images and deep thoughts...A very enjoyable read. yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww, Maga Margherita, yet another fine cosmic love post which is a feast for the eyes, heart ~ and soul...  "Whatever direction I take my steps are synchronized with my heart’s intuition." How you manage to keep coming up with these beauties, I'll never know! ~ Oh, but on second thought, I truly do know! Love you, sister spirit! Angelo Terrestre/Lunare  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lovely work ms mar...you meld love into a delicious puddle of romantica |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Margherita , I love the way you expressed heart's travelling the galaxy , beautifully blending upon silvery trails Hope |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita - I can't help but think if only, if only it was on earth as it is in Margherita's words but maybe we won't appreciate "immortal bliss" without this earthly experience. It's like going on holiday - always appreciate home more on the return. Of course, I loved your poem!  Helen |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Margherita - Wait!....Wait!...I'm still catching my breath. Okay..Okay...This leaps from the page and I loved the poetic craft of your words. Namyh P.S. - Ahhh! Now I feel better. Thanks M. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is very nice. However, it did take me back to my Army Special Weapons days. Love Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Crazy love particles twirl through the dark night sky with only one vital desire displayed in flashing signals in the mirrors of your eyes: “wait not, just light my fire!” Dear Margherita that must surely be one of your best. It was a delight to read my friend. much enjoyed. love to you dear Lady Lindsay |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You are so much fun. Delightful poem. Loved it, every line. latearrival |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all so much my dear Poet friends. Enjoyed your comments greatly. Will be away for the week-end, wishing you all a great one! Love, Margherita  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Electric love, all bright and shiny!! Breathtaking constellations, all lined up in such colorful poetry!! Very nice Margherita |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
 English is your third language. I am so ashamed. Stunning, Margherita. Heather |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
High voltage here Margherita, a nova in process across the heart. You write with deep passion. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
You speak of a beautiful place here and beyond, a place without fear or judgement |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you goddesses of poetry for your most kind replies! Love, Margherita |
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