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rad802
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0 posted 2009-05-07 06:53 AM


Love isby Rick Delmonico

All effort spend, in fact completely exhausted
The focus indeed very fine, the newness more so
The incredible heights both exhilarating and frightening
The drifting away softly slowly dreamily, destination unknown

Love is being
Being with you
Being one with you
Now we have seen things only we can share

Death is alone
Being without you
Being lost without you
I can only hope I will find my way back to you

Time gives us strength but also challenges
The road scatters out before us leaving us with confusing choices
Sometimes your choices seem strange, I forget to trust
You draw be back, my way would be lost without you

Love is life
Being beside you
Sharing the highs and lows
Covering each other in mutual shelter

Death is waiting
Separation is coming
The dull quiet of nothing
Or maybe the quiet serenity of each others heaven


Rick A. Delmonico

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-05-07 07:46 AM


Very poignant, dear Rick.

.... "exhilarating and frightening" ... yes!

Love,
Margherita

sarah 45
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since 2008-12-19
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2 posted 2009-05-07 08:37 AM


soooo amazing ..
a true definition of love... in the reall way

love it

T.C


Raindance
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since 2009-02-07
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3 posted 2009-05-07 08:49 AM


"Or maybe the quiet serenity of each others heaven"
I believe this.  I enjoyed your expressions here.


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-05-09 10:17 PM


Nice...James
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