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MissAnnonymous
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since 2009-05-06
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Derbyshire, England

0 posted 2009-05-06 04:43 PM


I'm sure most people have been through something like this at least once in their lives.

I love it when you say my name
And when you hold my hand
I love it when we're at the beach
Making castles with the sand

I love it when you make me laugh
with all the jokes you tell
I love it when I found out that
in love with you I fell

I love it when you always say
what I need to hear
I love it when I feel sick
so you always stay here

I love it when you hold me
and make me feel secure
I love it when I need you here
then you turn up at my door

I love it when you do the small things
that show me how much you care
I love it when we go away
just you and me somewhere

I love it when I look at you
and I get butterflies
But then you said you dont love me
and theres a part of me that died

Tell me what it was that I did wrong
that made you walk out on me
Tell me why you have changed your mind
Cos I love you, can't you see

I try to tell myself that I dont care
but my heart knows that I do
Back then, you and me became we
now it's back to just me and you

I know you know you're my everything
and I have loved you since day one
You once told me that you loved me too
so tell me why you've now gone

I loved it when you said my name
and when you held my hand
But like your mind the times have changed
and from your heart i'm banned

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1 posted 2009-05-06 05:11 PM


awww....it starts out so sweet...then gets so sad...

almost like two poems in one.

yes, I'm sure many can relate

MissNTrope
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2 posted 2009-05-06 07:10 PM


Welcome to Passions, MissAnn...

This is a very nice poem - I enjoyed and I'm pleased to see another Miss among us!





Nan
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3 posted 2009-05-06 07:11 PM


I'll second that!

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Ariana
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4 posted 2009-05-06 07:25 PM


Oh such sweet poetry.  I am so sorry for the ending.  Enjoyed

Ariana

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