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You were there
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You were there |
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MissAnnonymous New Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 5Derbyshire, England |
This one is about my dog that died yesterday, I wrote this a few hours after. I cried, You were there Sitting beside me Trying to console me I laughed You were there Jumping around me And laughing with me I was sick You were there Laying beside me Looking after me I woke up You were there Smiling at me Saying good morning to me I slept You were there Sleeping next to me And protecting me I went out You were there Walking next to me Making sure no one hurt me I needed a friend, you were there I needed to talk, you were there I needed to cry, you were there I needed to laugh, you were there You were always there Like a best friend would be You cried I was there Sitting with you Trying to comfort you You was ill I was there Right next to you Feeding medicine to you You slept I was there Looking at you Trying not to wake you You died I was there Crying for you Shouting, screaming, 'wake up you!' I cried You weren't there Sitting beside me Trying to console me |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
This made me cry. So sorry for your loss. I too know this pain. Take care, Tracey |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
made me cry too... I'm so sorry your dog died...I don't know what I'll do when my dogs pass...  |
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AlluraD Junior Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 28Florida |
Your words paint such a deep and precious bond...so sorry for the loss of your friend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You were there for him as he was there for you. A loving bond as strong as this, I believe, survives beyond death of the body. When my little cat "Magic" died, it felt as thought the magic went out of my life. But I can still feel her presence at times. I know that her spirit lives on.  I truly have compassion for you and your sense of loss. Sending a loving, healing hug, Earth Angel |
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