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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps the cheshire of my ego was all it was that teased with teeth at tomorrow's glass window wings were perverted really how they suggested freedom then mashed our noses you filled my hands with the breasts you had made out of the residue of your leftover heart and smiled against my kiss attemptations gnashing at my cellophane as if it had flavor we oiled our bones with saliva when mating procreation was almost a rap star disgusting but we needed the heat of our burning urges as if to free the iceman with a using woman addiction was a parking lot with gravel I remember the pebbles under my knees and the sound of stones hitting your get away when you went to husband beckon for dinner with my finger prints where you seldom gave him ________________ daark |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Whew. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
All love ain't pretty or is it.....thanks k |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
out of the residue of your leftover heart That line really "got" me... for so many reasons... some she probably shares. *S* Great work!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks lady friend |
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KeyLimeSorbet Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 74Colorado |
Enjoyed reading this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks KLS |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
"With my fingerprints where you seldom gave him" Favorite line... I'm going through reading all your stuff, it's amazing. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you so much SFA, you make me smile |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I'll carry this with me to bed - if I had a book of your poems, it would be on my bedside table. It's like Arabian Nights to me. I'd have to read one a night. You bring the magic of dreams. Night, D. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...I could just sit on your bedside table and recite some to you..or..thanks babe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wickedly Daaaaaark! Deliciously penetrating! Eric |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
no, all love ain't pretty |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks eric.... ___________________ ms slick...but we could fix that yes?, thanks lady |
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