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Shadow Angel
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0 posted 05-31-2009 08:17 AM       View Profile for Shadow Angel   Email Shadow Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Shadow Angel's Home Page   View IP for Shadow Angel


Rustic


Long the days burning...
summer licks the skin golden,
hungers for that wet kiss of sea
that haunts in refrain,
it sings to the shore, of
white horses
that rush the altar in worship

sunflower moments, melt slowly...
we catch the drops
of ice-cream
that fall vanilla sultry
to our bare parchment,
chase the setting sun,
her fire falls...to meet our own

we walk in autumn poetry;
a lattice of flesh
and thought
spilling...
the pulsing wind runs
like fingers through hair
to tease...touch...
spiral henna like

we are the quickening;
our voices
cinnamon & cloves
to the dusking hours,
we taste the crisp scent
of nature's garment
in the biting air

our words drift as leaves...
rustic in their language,
sanguine in their swirling,
they burn
with eloquence
and fall at our feet
© Copyright 2009 Sasha - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 05-31-2009 09:03 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Welcome to Pip, dear Sasha!

I love your first entry very much, especially ...


quote:
our voices
cinnamon & cloves
to the dusking hours,
we taste the crisp scent
of nature's garment
in the biting air



Very nice!

Love,
Margherita
Honeybunch
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Wonderful write, Sasha!  Yes indeed it is!  So I went looking for a post from you after your comment on my "Dust from stone" post.  In case you don't read my reply there, are you the Sasha who has posted at Terry's site?  I used to post there under the name of Guinevere.  

Welcome to Pip.  I look forward to reading more of your poetry here.

Helen
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Welcome to Pip! Yes, I ditto the comments above, this is beautiful writing.
BluesSerenade
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we walk in autumn poetry;
a lattice of flesh
and thought
spilling...
the pulsing wind runs
like fingers through hair
to tease...touch...
spiral henna like
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Beautiful poem, love your style, fabulous entrance to the blue pages.

Some kind of wonderful!!!!  Truly!
Shadow Angel
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~  thank you so much, Margherita

I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem, my friend
it's a privilege to be in such fine company

*hugs*

Sasha xx

Shadow Angel
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~ hiya Helen,

I do remember you as Gunievere
it's so good to see and read you again, dear one

thank you so much for taking a moment to read this poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it

*hugs*

Sash xx


Shadow Angel
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~   Hiya Kaoru  

thank you for stopping in on this piece, my friend
your lovely comment is much appreciated

*hugs*

Sasha xx


P.S. is "Kaoru" Maori?

Shadow Angel
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~  thank you so much for the warm welcome, Blues

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this piece
I'm really loving the poetry I've been reading here

you all shine!

*hugs*

Sasha xx


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9 posted 05-31-2009 11:12 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

A love envisioning of your surroundings,
whether they be inner or outer thoughts
of a day, a time, a moment.

Well done, Angel.

Welcome to Passions!

Please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Oklahoma Rose
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Welcome to Pip! This is a beautiful poem.
Shadow Angel
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~   thank you sooo much, for the card, Sunshine

such a wonderfully warm welcome
I am stoked that you enjoyed this piece, my friend
thank you for smiling my day

*hugs*

Sasha xx


Shadow Angel
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~  thank you Oklahoma Rose

nice to meet you, my friend
I'm touched by your comment, and glad you enjoyed this poem

see you out there

*hugs*

Sasha xx


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Pure bliss in enchanting words.  I did adore this beautiful poem.  
~ Heart2Heart ~
Shadow Angel
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~  heart2heart, thank you, my friend

I'm happy you like this piece
thanks so much for stopping by

*hugs*

Sasha xx

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15 posted 06-01-2009 11:33 AM       View Profile for fmlbarebackrider2001   Email fmlbarebackrider2001   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fmlbarebackrider2001

Welcome to Pip!

"Not everyone can be heros. Someone has to sit on the curb and clap as they pass by." Will Rogers

unboundpoetess
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And of course you are lovely!

(((( Sash )))))

welcome!

H
ctowen
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17 posted 06-01-2009 02:46 PM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

Welcome indeed, a pleasure to read.
  and thank you for dropping by and leaving your velveting touch!

   Craig
Bill Charles
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18 posted 06-02-2009 12:26 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Shadow Angel - thoroughly enjoyed your writing. Waiting to read more of them... Very nicely written....

BC
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Sasha,

Welcome to PiP.  I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry.  I truly enjoyed the poetic cycle of the seasons that you have shared with us.  Each is beautiful and you did well in framing them with your words.

Alison
Earth Angel
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A veritable feast for the senses!!!

Greetings, Shadow Angel, and welcome to this family of kindred spirits! I thoroughly enjoyed your debuting poem!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel
jwesley
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21 posted 06-02-2009 02:29 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Very much enjoyed this wonderful piece, my friend...look forward to more from you...

jimmy
JamesMichael
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Very nice...James
HAZARD
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23 posted 06-24-2009 08:20 AM       View Profile for HAZARD   Email HAZARD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HAZARD

Hello - I'm New to your forums. With a lot to learn!

This poem crept quietly inside me - caught me a little off guard. I read it over again. It has an lovely ethereal quality. Much liked.

ta ra

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