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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-05-04 10:12 PM

Mom and her latest man
are sitting out on the stoop,
a warm May night.

There sitting there,
each one nursing
a quart of cold beer.

They have the radio playing
a sweet,
romantic tune.

Mom and her new man
are a little tipsy.

They decide to
start in singing
with the radio.

Bones waits until the pair
starts slurring their words
to the song.

They’re obviously out of it.

Bones is sitting
across the street
talking to Wawa.

“Yo Wawa,
I’m going to nail
those two fools.”

Bones sneaks over,
and turns the radio off.

Mom and her man go nuts,
start screaming
and making a big loud fuss.

You can hear them
all over the street.

Bones decides
he better not go home
that night.

He gets Wawa
to put him up.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (05-05-2009 12:26 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2009-05-04 11:21 PM

Bobby - I'm glad Bones knows Wawa. Good that he stayed there after Bone's revenge...

BC

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-05-05 04:29 AM

Bones has some revenge in his soul.
That's what happens when one doesn't get used right.
Good work Bobby.

Eric

Marc-Andre
Senior Member

since 2008-12-07

Posts 501

3 posted 2009-05-05 04:52 AM

Vivid, evocative, well-executed. Bobby, you are one of the few writers I know that can pen this down right. We are thankful.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2009-05-05 12:25 PM

Thanks Bill,

Yes, Wawa has always been a good friend. Where would we be without friends like Wawa.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-05-05 12:28 PM

Thanks Eric,

Yes, you've hit the nail on the head. That's what revenge is all about. Bones tries not to think too much that way. It bothers him a lot.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2009-05-05 12:30 PM

Thanks Marc-Andre,

For the kind words. This incident is vivid in my memory. It was fun.

Bobby

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