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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-05-03 01:01 PM


Meet Me In Forever

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-05-03 01:08 PM


Kind sir, praytell, where mightst I find "Forever" ~ then I shall forthwith meet you there!

Oh, Bill, such a rhapsodically romantic poet, ye be!


Linda

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2 posted 2009-05-03 02:36 PM


Enjoyed your lovely romantic write, dear Bill. You explore the forever love sites and bring smiles. I would exclude behind the moon, unless you are an astronaut and know the place!

Love,
Margherita

Klassy Lassy
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3 posted 2009-05-03 08:59 PM


Ah, the dreams we dream:  Romantic, ethereal, and wistful.  I enjoyed the journey.   ~K
Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-05-03 09:22 PM


Yo Bill,

This is an interesting picture of the big moon, and a great poem to go with it.

Good job.

Bobby

Oklahoma Rose
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5 posted 2009-05-04 08:15 AM


A very beautiful, and romantic poem, Bill! I'll meet you in forever. In the forever is just my kind of place.
2islander2
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6 posted 2009-05-04 02:41 PM


very beautiful prayer with elegant words, thank you for sharing this so romantic moment.

regards

yann

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2009-05-04 07:39 PM


You are a shadow of the moon's great light and love
SEA
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8 posted 2009-05-04 07:53 PM


loved the last stanza...

so beautiful...you are such a wonderful romantic!

HopeS
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9 posted 2009-05-05 12:27 PM


Meet me in forever , Bill this was  such a beautiful thought

Hope

LindsayP
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10 posted 2009-05-05 01:08 AM



That is such a sweet tender poem Bill,

A delight to read my friend, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Marc-Andre
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11 posted 2009-05-05 03:08 AM


Bill, a beautiful, soothing right as always. I love your poetry.

Mark

ethome
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12 posted 2009-05-05 04:26 AM


Great pic!
Bill you are the master of romance. Especially that second verse.
Loved this!

Eric

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13 posted 2009-05-05 11:06 AM


Such a beautiful write of romance... who could resist such entreaty? *S* Just lovely!
Charisma
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14 posted 2009-05-05 04:38 PM


~*Sigh*~

This was so beautifully romantic penned,
Meet me in forever, I'll be there!


Theresia

Bill Charles
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15 posted 2009-05-05 05:49 PM


Linda - I will wait for you there, in forever...

Margherita - ah yes, but behind the moon is a romantic world waiting to be discovered...

Klassy Lassy - I'm glad that you enjoyed this journey...

Bobby - as always, thank you for your reply...

Oklahoma Rose - I'm sure this forever is your kind of place...

2islander2 - you're most kind with your reply to this writing...

inkedgoddess - your words touch me. For some reason I love the moon, especially when in romance...

SEA - you also my dear, are a true romantic...

HopeS - forever is a most beautiful place...

Lindsay - my friend, I'm glad you liked this one...

Marc-Andre - your words touch me, I'm glad my words you touch you...

ethome - it's in there somewhere, and keeps on coming out...

suthern - romance it is, in forever...

Charisma - I'll be waiting there...

BC

vandana
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16 posted 2009-05-05 06:01 PM


nice read
jwesley
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17 posted 2009-05-05 06:10 PM


Great write Bill...I think we all yearn for ever, especially if it's a beautiful as you see it....

j.

Bill Charles
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18 posted 2009-05-05 09:28 PM


vandana - thanks for coming by for a read...

jwesley - appreciate your comments about this write, and thanks for the compliment...

BC

Rose of Sharon
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19 posted 2009-05-06 12:26 PM


Bill


      I wonder where forever ends, perhaps behind the moon.  

Suncleaver
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20 posted 2009-05-06 08:55 AM


'Come to me, for I would whisper to you of desires deep,
Ecstasy would be of pleasures to never end the night'.

Lovely romantic writing Bill.

There's just something deeply magical and sensuous about the moonlight.

Bill Charles
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21 posted 2009-05-06 12:03 PM


Rose of Sharon - I'm not sure where it ends, but it must be a good place, then again it may be behind the moon...

Suncleaver - I love the moonlight, and the romance it can bring...

BC

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