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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-05-02 04:15 PM





    


Come, let me take you by the hand; I'll lead you to a secret place
where dwells the hidden one, who seldom feels the sun upon his face.
Come tip-toe past dark memories that echo down these shadowy halls,
be not afraid... you will not stumble,
I will catch you, if you fall.

Within this labyrinth of sorrow, strewn about with shattered dreams,
discover now, the secret one... for naught is ever as it seems.
The lost romantic, pierced by evils selfish cynics say and do;
His words of love quite out of fashion; used by all...
meant by so few.

His woven words, spun soft and gentle have no place... cannot succeed,
in a world of subterfuge, mendacity, and naked greed.
What happened to the childhood truths once taught, with patience,
and, with care?
Shed carelessly, with scant remembrance;
damage, words cannot repair.

Remember then, the hidden one, who, in the darkness, must remain,
shackled to his empathy; he knows the sorrow and the pain;
and, turning back with eyes unseeing, snuffs the flame he tried to free;
his words... no more than sparrow's tears
in a sea of brash cupidity.



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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2009-05-02 04:22 PM


I think this is one of your best, Dave. I sometimes feel like "The Hidden One" myself.
                                       Ida

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2 posted 2009-05-02 05:01 PM


a smidge on the dark side....almost feels
like a chant.  Very nicley written,  thanx
for sharing it!

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3 posted 2009-05-04 11:12 AM


You're never one to disappoint your reader. You always deliver; another fine poem.
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4 posted 2009-05-04 08:00 PM


makes me want to read it by candle light

a pleasure

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5 posted 2009-05-05 09:52 AM


His words of love quite out of fashion; used by all...
meant by so few.

But when they are meant, they're all the more appreciated. *S* This is so beautiful, my friend! *S*

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6 posted 2009-05-06 09:03 PM


simply EXCELLENT !

long-sustained applause for this fine 'penning'!!

[very effective photo. image also]

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2009-05-06 10:16 PM


Gorgeous write Sir! ~ Very mystical and peaceful pic


ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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8 posted 2009-05-06 10:45 PM



Top accolades for this one Dave,

You are very clever with words my friend.
Enjoyed.

Lindsay

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9 posted 2009-05-06 10:55 PM


this is nice

Lana

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10 posted 2009-05-07 07:32 AM


~Sir Dave Of Camelot ,

I for one, am listening to your words,
they are not falling on deaf ears, nor a deaf heart....nor are they hidden..

such a pleasure to see you write in
this character as well....

You never know the depths of love,
until you discover the depths of pain~
me

~ARH

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