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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-05-02 03:04 AM



I AM

I am imaginative and silly.
I wonder if the sky really goes on forever
I hear clouds gossiping as they drift
I see shoodle-doodles dance through my window pane
I want to give a home to all stray animals I see
I am imaginative and silly.

I pretend that my cats and dogs really converse with me
I feel that fairies dance under the moon
I touch their translucent wings
I worry that imagination is being stifled by technology
I cry over hurt and lost animals
I am imaginative and silly.

I understand that I am loved
I say lumpy oatmeal really does make me crazy
I dream of living in the old house that I grew up in
I try to be kind and less outspoken
I hope I share the magic of “pretend”
I am imaginative and silly.


* shoodle-doodles are the dust particles that dance in sun beams.  That was my name for them when I was a toddler and it stuck in my family.

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Alison ~ shoodle-doodle lover

[This message has been edited by Alison (05-02-2009 12:38 PM).]

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2islander2
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1 posted 2009-05-02 04:29 AM


Hello Alison, this cute and imaginative, I enjoyed very much this poem and its deep lightness and images.

have  a nice day


yann


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2 posted 2009-05-02 04:35 AM


Beautiful, Alison. Now I know what to call those little dust particles.
                                   Ida

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3 posted 2009-05-02 07:23 AM


You are a good person
an identity!

Ringo
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4 posted 2009-05-02 08:37 AM


YAY, Shoodle-doodles!!!!

Thanks for writing.

But this one goes to eleven...
http://www.hubpages.com/profile/RingoShort

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5 posted 2009-05-02 09:51 AM


~ and who wouldn't love a shoodle-doodle lover?!?

I enjoyed learning a bit more about you, Ms Ali Boop! ~ and ta knows ya is ta luvs ya!

You're as cute and cuddly as all of your animals! ~ stuffed and otherwise! lol

Love you!

Lindy Lou



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6 posted 2009-05-02 10:12 AM


Yo dear Alison,

It's all right to be both imaginative and silly.  It's also more fun.

Love Bobby

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7 posted 2009-05-02 01:34 PM


Glad to know you, Alison. I loveya just the way you are. I see you are an animal lover, just like me. It would be nice to have a place where we could take in all the strays.
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8 posted 2009-05-02 02:23 PM


Imagination is the creator and silliness the stabilizing factor because without it we may go crazy!  Thank you for this look within - lovely view!

Helen

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9 posted 2009-05-02 03:42 PM



"If you aint crazy, something's wrong with you" --- Willie Nelson

::smiles::

You are a delightful little shoodle-doodle

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10 posted 2009-05-04 08:31 PM


v. well done!

I am especially fond of:

I wonder if the sky really goes on forever"

and:

I hear clouds gossiping as they drift"

"I worry that imagination is being stifled by technology"

In addition to the 3 R's ... I believe we need also worry about the
vanishing 3 C's in (alleged) 'education' ... Curiosity; Creativity;
and Common sense! ...

applause for this 'penning' !!

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11 posted 2009-05-05 10:57 AM


You are a complete delight... and so is this self-portrait! *S* I love the thought of shoodle-doodles dancing! *S*
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12 posted 2009-05-05 03:23 PM


Ala-hoon,

You are the bomb.

Yours, truly,

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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13 posted 2009-05-05 05:26 PM


Love this. Is the 'I Am' challenge new? Funny, cause I just wrote an 'I Am' the other day...lol.
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14 posted 2009-05-05 05:57 PM


enjoyed
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15 posted 2009-05-05 05:58 PM


It's "silly" you that brought me into the 'I AM' sillys....after reading this ... well, why not....

Loved it,

j.

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16 posted 2009-05-05 06:16 PM


"I hear clouds gossiping as they drift"

enjoyed this view of you and the shoodle doodles

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17 posted 2009-05-05 06:25 PM


Love the shoodle-doodle and off course love the poem.
Thanks for sharing!

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18 posted 2009-05-05 06:29 PM


This description fits your smile so perfectly, dear Alison!

Of course the list could go on with still more magic to enjoy, I feel.

You are such a cute girl and poetess.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
19 posted 2009-05-07 03:04 AM


yann,

Thank you, my friend.  Your comments always bring me joy.

Alison

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Ida,

Yep, shoodle-doodles!  Thank you lots.

xoxoxo
Alison

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Kushal,

Thank you.  It's always a wonderful thing to see that you have stopped in.

Alison

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Hey Ringo,

Thank you for bringing this challenge back.  It's fun to participate in and read all the others.

Alison

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Linda,

I have been thinking of you lately.  Thank you.  You have a basketful full of wonderful that you sprinkle about our pages.

Love,
Alison

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Bobby,

Yep, Bobby.  You are right on both counts.  Thank you.

Alison

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Hey Uriah,

Thanks and backatcha!

Ali

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Bruce,

I so agree with you about the 3 C's.  Great point - I hope we are wrong in what we are seeing.

Alison

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Ruth,

Wanna dance among them with me?  Thank you lots.

xoxoxo
Alison

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Tina,

Thank you, beautiful one.  I think Ringo ressurected this challenge and I am so glad he did.

Love,
Alison

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jimmy,

Thank you.  Silly is good, I believe.

xoxox
Alison

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Thank you, dear vandana.

A

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Thanks, SEA.  It makes me happy to see you become a believer in shoodle-doodles!

xoxoxo
Alison

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Charisma,

Thank you.  It's nice to meet you and I appreciate you reading.

Alison

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Margherita,

You bring joy with every response.

Love,
Alison

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