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Open Poetry #44

Slow Burn

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-05-01 11:51 AM

With just her voice
She ignited a slow burn
Casual glances from pictures
So many mysteries to learn

To dive in and explore
And for more than that, he yearned
All that is missing in his life
For all of her heat, he burned

She radiates the glow
Another head is turned
He lays down in the fire
Of a very slow burn

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-05-01 12:08 PM

Wow! *S* It suddenly got very WARM in here... even though my employer keeps the AC cranked to icycle temps! *G* Some burns are worth than worth a few blisters. *G*

I love this! *S* Wonderful write, my friend! *S*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-05-03 10:52 AM

Good morning, CG!

I echo suthern's "Wow!" In fact, that goes double for me!

The lyrics "Burn baby, burn" ~ come to mind!

~ A smouldering piece of writing!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2009-05-03 10:56 AM

I feel like I'm supposed to smoke a cigarette after reading this. I don't even smoke.

Nice work.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-05-05 08:38 AM

I forgot to put this in my library first time around... not surprising since I forgot to breathe, too. *G*

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