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vandana
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0 posted 2009-04-30 07:43 PM





Prayer

I may ask
With my heart
For this prayer
I pray for everyone
I pray every night
For the world who suffers a lot
I pray for love
To give
To live
I am here to stand own my feet
I held up my head high
To look upon these skies
Shining through my eyes
I can see clearly now
How hard life is?
So I pray for everyone
In this world
For whom I love thee
I want to open my eyes
And see the world
There is so much to see
Let the things be right
I ask for this prayer
To stand up
Seeking for this prayer

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1 posted 2009-04-30 08:05 PM


"I may ask
With my heart
For this prayer
I pray for everyone
I pray every night
For the world who suffers a lot
I pray for love
To give
To live"

this is so wonderful

I hope your prayer comes true

2islander2
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2 posted 2009-05-01 01:43 AM


I want to open my eyes
And see the world
There is so much to see
Thank you for sharing beautiful verses.

have a nice day

yann

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3 posted 2009-05-01 10:41 AM


Beautiful prayer, my friend. *S*
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4 posted 2009-05-01 06:15 PM


Wonderful...James
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5 posted 2009-05-01 07:42 PM


Amen poet friend!


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6 posted 2009-05-03 11:49 PM


Vandana,

May the prayers just wash back over you.  The love shines from your poetry - thank you so much for sharing with us.

Alison

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7 posted 2009-05-03 11:56 PM


vandana - you have a heart that is very gracious. Very touching write, with meaning...

BC

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8 posted 2009-05-05 05:10 PM


Thank you for sharing this beautiful prayer


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9 posted 2009-05-05 05:52 PM


Dear vandana, may everything that you so selflessly ask for others, be blessings that rain down upon yourself, as well.


Linda

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10 posted 2009-05-05 07:13 PM


Dear Vandana, this is really a touching prayer!

Thank you for sharing it.

Love,
Margherita

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