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Open Poetry #44

The river of love

Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2009-04-30 06:49 PM

The love I posse for you is like a river.
Powerful and flowing.
There is never one to far.
From the beginning of it, to the very end
You never know whats around the bend.
Long distances it travels.
The current is strong, always there.
But has a steady flow.
It can sweep you off your feet.
Water going to and from.
Depths can be unknown to the eye
But the river knows.
Deep in many parts, shallow in others.
But with its natural beauty its always to be seen.
Some parts hidden away.
Just have to keep looking.
A river is a natural thing.
Just like you and I.
You are the water in my river
Without the water, it wouldn't be a river.

Looking for love
in all the wrong places.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-05-01 01:46 AM

This is beautiful, a well expressed metaphor shared with talent.

have a nice day

yann

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