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Ephemeral Tenderness.

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Goldenrose
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0 posted 04-29-2009 07:16 PM       View Profile for Goldenrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Goldenrose


In the morning light,
love guides you away
from dreamscapes into a
place far away from
reality into surreal wonder.
Smoothing hands shiver skin
softly,lips kiss lightly
to thrill eyes closed
to darkness and plunge,
fall freely and emerge
at the shoreline of
eyes that swim only
for you,reflect the
stars only for you,
lift passions veil only
for you and conjoined
hearts that beat a
shared sound of life,
in utopian and fragrant
bird sung daydreams, by
cool watered streams of
evanescent light that is
the metaphor of human
love, life and being.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 04-29-2009 07:53 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

grand imagery and Romanticism ...

lovely read !

I am especially fond of:

"...conjoined
hearts that beat a
shared sound of life(!)"

MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !!
Alwye
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In the space between moments


2 posted 04-29-2009 08:28 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I like "smothing hands shiver skin"--great use of alliteration!

Beautifully tender and romantic.  Great read!
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


3 posted 04-29-2009 08:48 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Goldenrose - enjoyed reading this writing...

BC
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


4 posted 04-29-2009 10:43 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

I was labouring over which lines to quote as being my favourites ~ There were several of them!

Shdp and Alwye chose already quoted a few of them ~ which helped narrow what I would quote! lol

~ "bird sung daydreams, by
cool watered streams of
evanescent light"...

Lovely writing, dear Rose of Gold!


Linda

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I loved this, Goldenrose.

There's no better experience.
Marchmadness
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6 posted 04-30-2009 12:48 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Lovely writing, Phil.
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7 posted 04-30-2009 05:34 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

What a tender love write.
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good read
steavenr
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such a cool title for such a neat write...well done....well done...loved how chock full it is of little pictures that you have drawn with your words
A Romantic Heart
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I enjoyed every line especially the one about passions veil...I like all of it!

~ARH
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