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pen&paper
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0 posted 2009-04-29 06:54 PM



Eyes meet
Lips touch
Arms embrace
Hands explore
New places
Pause.
  Hold on...
Where were we?
Ah, that's right.
Eyes meet
Lips touch
Arms embrace
Hands explore
Now familliar places

But wait: what if...?

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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2009-04-29 07:00 PM


Now you have me waiting for the "what if".  I like the pause and then the follow through.  It makes the mind sort of visualize the intensity that must have come within that pause.
WTBAKELAR
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2 posted 2009-04-29 09:22 PM


I'm guessing the hands were feeling that new persons shoulder blades, Right?

Cute write,  Oh if it gets past 1st base, move it to Mature content so we can enjoy a little voyerism.

OOPs,  Did I say that?
Tracey.

pen&paper
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3 posted 2010-02-15 11:57 AM


this was,by no means, at all about first base. ...or second really...going a bit past third...
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