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Eyes meet
Lips touch
Arms embrace
Hands explore
New places
Pause.
  Hold on...
Where were we?
Ah, that's right.
Eyes meet
Lips touch
Arms embrace
Hands explore
Now familliar places

But wait: what if...?
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Now you have me waiting for the "what if".  I like the pause and then the follow through.  It makes the mind sort of visualize the intensity that must have come within that pause.
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2 posted 04-29-2009 09:22 PM       View Profile for WTBAKELAR   Email WTBAKELAR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WTBAKELAR

I'm guessing the hands were feeling that new persons shoulder blades, Right?

Cute write,  Oh if it gets past 1st base, move it to Mature content so we can enjoy a little voyerism.

OOPs,  Did I say that?
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this was,by no means, at all about first base. ...or second really...going a bit past third...
 
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