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touch of palm--with Mark Bohannan

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Greeneyes
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0 posted 04-29-2009 06:15 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


The embrace of Luna wrapped the night
In arms illuminated by our touch of palm
The flame of passion rose to new height
As embers of discovery introduced calm

First rain dreams birth September recall
Where we met greeting dawns pure sky
Untainted love answered by standing tall
With first breath of kiss in lingering sigh

Always daring the moon to pull the dark
The dark of silhouettes in delicate trace
Whose hands have touched silken mark
And spell of smoke on constellations lace

The courtship of eyes waltz on high tide
Glistening on horizon of intimate recline
Whispers of tease flirt in cautious pride
Between fingers in roam to touch divine

I inhale while my mouth searches for fire
My trail in the warmth of your skin found
That I might find you still kissed in desire
By a touch of my pressed palms in sound

        ~ Whispering to my soul ~

Be not the stranger of my heart in flight
Reduced to such ember I have breathed
Each shadow and root hidden from night
In night of you my hearts amber retrieved

Should I find that warmth embodied deep
Allowing the essence of love become me
May I dance again ... leaving me to sleep
Between hands of night making a decree

Hearts erupt in quiver to release of surge
Massaging drape of eyes searching sky
As heaven and embrace begin to merge
When two souls collapse in smiling sigh


~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-30-2009 09:14 AM).]

© Copyright 2009 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-29-2009 06:44 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A pleasure to read...James
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James - Thank you and glad you enjoyed.

Lauren - What can I say.... I really enjoyed writing this with you but even more so I have to admit that I am smiling seenig your name attached to a "rhyme". Thanks again for the opportunity.  
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3 posted 04-29-2009 07:50 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

fine imagery and Romanticism ...

a pleasure to read!

sustained applause for this 'penning' !!
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4 posted 04-29-2009 08:39 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very romantic and great imagery!  

I love when you two write duets.
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Greeneyes - your words are exquisite, your thoughts romantic, your writing impeccable, well done you two...

BC
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Bravissimo! My word! ~ I mean, YOUR words!!!
You two bring it 'ahn'!

Can you see/hear my own smiling sigh?!?



Linda

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hey thanks for the sweet replies..... tis a pleasure to write again, and to have such great inspire! -s

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

Greeneyes
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8 posted 04-29-2009 11:34 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Mark... such a great teacher, and so patient with me...hugssss ..possibly the first rhyme I've ever done....but I learned, so Im thanking you for that, and for the words....

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

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9 posted 04-30-2009 01:03 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Now wasn't that just a rhyme sublime.  You two duet well together.
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Thank you all so much for your replies.  They are appreciated much.

Lauren, again I thank you and I also learned much from you.     
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yes you two "do it" well together...(don't go there I was talking about writing)
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Dark - Now I would never be the one to accuse you of going there. I knew exactly what you meant.  Thank you kindly sir.
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13 posted 04-30-2009 07:37 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

very nice
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vandana - Thank you so much.  It is always a pleasure to see your name here.
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Beautiful and romantic... you two weave your words wonderfully! *S*
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16 posted 05-03-2009 11:39 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Ruth - Thank you dearly.  Can you believe I got the greeneyed girl to do a rhyme?   

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Excellent colab.!  You both always make the
most of it, always have...
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There are so many great captivating lines in this beautiful poem. The pleasure you felt in creating it, is felt. Compliments to both.

Love,
Margherita
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19 posted 05-05-2009 05:16 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Love the imagery and what a great piece you two wrote here.
Loved it!


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20 posted 05-05-2009 05:18 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

A sweet seduction.


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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Thank you all very much for your wonderful replies.  They are all very much appreciated.    
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I've wondered if the day would come, lol!

   A great piece of work and I am certain not that hard of a struggle, it was always there for Lauren to rhyme in time.

     I applaude!
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So many wonderful lines filled with eloquent expressions.
I really got lost in them all but these two hit me right on the poetic comprehension button.

Whispers of tease flirt in cautious pride
Between fingers in roam to touch divine


However, I loved it all.
You both should be very pleased with the results you have accomplished.

Eric
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ctowen- hey there, thank you for stopping by and signing your name, such a smile it adds...

ethome-- appreciate the lines you touched on, thank you much...

hugsss and luv to all

thank you...

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

 
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