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viking_metal
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0 posted 04-29-2009 11:32 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for viking_metal


The tattoo dances
as your hips circumvent
and circulate
my surrounding areas.

Our air is thick
with heat and sweat.
Forty-five minutes
of something wonderful.

Tell me,
how good it feels
to meet someone real.
Tell me,
it can never be
anything more than this.

Damn.

__________________________________________________


-P


Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

© Copyright 2009 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 04-29-2009 11:56 AM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo Paul,

Nice work.  I haven't seen you in a while.

Say hello to Sara for me.

Bobby
Pilgrimage
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2 posted 04-29-2009 12:49 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

Tell me.  I like the warmth of this one, and the way you use the tatoo to build it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

viking_metal
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3 posted 04-29-2009 01:16 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Rob-bob... Thanks dude. I don't really know how to write anymore. I will start again, and let it unfold.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

viking_metal
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4 posted 04-29-2009 01:18 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Howdy Pilgrim. (name that movie.)

Thanks very much.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Margherita
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5 posted 04-29-2009 03:47 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

That was quite obviously some great quality time ...

lovely!

Love,
Margherita
viking_metal
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6 posted 04-29-2009 04:29 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Quality until the "I hope this doesn't interfere with our friendship." talk. This is coming off warmer than I wrote it. Ha... That's alright. It's a half full or half empty poem. It all depends on how you view the words.


-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Bill Charles
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7 posted 04-29-2009 08:52 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

viking_metal - found this writing to be sensual, very nice I must say...

BC
Suncleaver
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8 posted 04-29-2009 10:51 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

Oh, I liked this.

You can't beat forty-five minutes of something wonderful.

And as to viking metal, who do you think's better, Amon Amarth or Tyr? I know they're both different styles, but on the debate rages...
Earth Angel
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9 posted 04-29-2009 11:01 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Viking! You're back! ~ As well as the continuation of the Sara series?!

Can feel the smouldering passion!!!


EA

viking_metal
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10 posted 04-30-2009 01:12 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

BC- Thank you much sir.

Sun- Amon Amarth. I don't like viking metal that much anyhow. It's more heritage and iron than anything else.

EA- Well ma'am, not quite. It was the Sadie series. Sara is a new interest that seems to have already panned out negatively. Thank you very much.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Boshii2
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11 posted 05-01-2009 02:52 AM       View Profile for Boshii2   Email Boshii2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Boshii2

just hold the pen
that's all you need to do
missed you ,Boshii2
viking_metal
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12 posted 05-01-2009 10:31 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Thanks Boshii.

Me and the pen grew apart. It was an awkward reintroduction.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

brneyedgrly
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13 posted 06-10-2009 03:49 PM       View Profile for brneyedgrly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brneyedgrly

hot... hot... smoldering hot!  ; )

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

brneyedgrly
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14 posted 06-10-2009 06:26 PM       View Profile for brneyedgrly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brneyedgrly

this is the second poem i've read of yours that boasts about forty-five minutes of some kind of love...heehee...i am jealous

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

viking_metal
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15 posted 06-15-2009 11:27 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Well ma'am, 45 minutes is a rushed no-nonsense situation. Those are awful good situations at times, though...

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

 
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