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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2009-04-28 10:26 PM


Long and Graceful Wings

Freedom is a journey
Not the destination bound
Traveled light and airy
Landing highest branches found
Movement builds the body
Muscle moves the open mind
Traveled light and airy
Freedom, will one come to find

Sweepers of the sunlit clouds
Keepers of the soft moon call
Ethers move as shadows come
Long and graceful wings befall
Freedom is a journey
Not the destination bound
Traveled light and airy
Landing highest branches found

Copyright Kkh 4/28/09


© Copyright 2009 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-04-29 05:33 AM


Dear Kathleen, you are sharing a wonderful piece of poetry and wisdom with us here.

I am in awe.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2009-04-29 07:44 AM


Writing with such beauty! ~ Loving Words


ARCTIC WIND

Raindance
Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120
West Coast
3 posted 2009-04-29 08:58 AM


Powerful words made light as air.  I knew I'd love this when I saw the title.  Keeping this one.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-04-29 09:04 AM



TD





EA



Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-04-29 09:05 AM


...SAVED
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
6 posted 2009-04-29 11:52 AM


Another incredible keeper from you.
I love the rhythmic flow that you created here. Gorgeous!

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
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7 posted 2009-04-29 12:45 PM


I especially LOVE the ending of this 'write'!:

"Sweepers of the sunlit clouds
Keepers of the soft moon call
Ethers move as shadows come
Long and graceful wings befall
Freedom is a journey
Not the destination bound
Traveled light and airy
Landing highest branches found(~)"

applause for this penning !!

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
8 posted 2009-04-29 04:37 PM


Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2009-04-29 08:51 PM


ThisDiamond - another great write...

BC

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
10 posted 2009-04-29 10:19 PM



Kathleen that is a beautiful poem,

A real pleasure to read, thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

11 posted 2009-05-04 12:45 PM


"Freedom is a journey
Not the destination bound"

...there is such wisdom in these words...made even nicer by virtue of how beautifully the words roll off one's tongue...nicely done

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