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Open Poetry #44

dawning day

SeraphimBroken
Member

since 2009-03-09

Posts 74
USA

0 posted 2009-04-28 09:53 PM

Comfort me not oh friend of woe.
I have had your embrace
once upon a many moon.

Tarry me no more this dark night,
eyes close upon your foreboding.
With morning's light I may wake soon.

Given unto me your wares
of grieving promise facade.
Tear streaked pillows clutched in hand.

Hope is my embrace of the morning.
Let go of me wings of demons,
patronize my life's longing no more.

I breathe the dawning day of release
within my grasp.
With the rising sun, I cry no more.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-04-29 06:10 AM

Beautifully expressed! We should try to close our eyes in the evening keeping the morning's beauty in our thoughts and let the demons with empty hands.

Love,
Margherita

SeraphimBroken
Member

since 2009-03-09

Posts 74
USA

2 posted 2009-04-29 07:05 PM

Margherita;

Thanks so much! I have to practice closing my eyes quite a bit lately, at least the dawn keeps them open for a spell.

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