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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-04-28 12:44 PM


Music On My Mind

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suthern
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1 posted 2009-04-28 01:29 PM


I'm not a good dancer... but I sure listen well and would love to hear. *S* Beautiful, beautiful! *s*
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2009-04-28 01:38 PM


Dear Troubadour, you croon a mighty sweet love song ~ One which many a fair maiden would undoubtedly love to listen ~ and dance ~ to!


Linda


Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2009-04-28 02:16 PM


Yo Bill,

This is a nice song.  I like your fade away ellipses.

Bobby

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2009-04-28 02:38 PM


I gotta tell you, while the music is playing I'll melt, but you might have a problem playing that guitar and doing what else you have on your mind at the same time.  Um, that is dancing, right?

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-04-28 04:33 PM



Dear Bill, you have quite the program I see. To dance is wonderful, it makes us feel alive.
Very romantic for sure.
Love,
Margherita

ps: those white letters on black background made me see strings of light for quite a while ... such intensity!

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2009-04-28 06:18 PM


suthern - I love to dance, and surely I could teach you a few steps. Would love to play for you anytime...

Linda - shucks, I'd play you a little ole love song anytime...

Bobby - always appreciate seeing your replies to my writings...

Pligrimage - U'mmmm, not sure it's dancing, singing, or, well, h'mmmmm. I'm sure the guitar won't get in the way...

Margherita - to read your words from someone as lovely as you is enlightening...

BC

Oklahoma Rose
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7 posted 2009-04-30 09:12 PM


I'm a very good listener, Bill. Always here if you need an ear.
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2009-04-30 10:13 PM


Oklahoma Rose - you're most kind, thank you very much...

BC

HopeS
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9 posted 2009-05-01 12:36 PM


Although we are oceans apart , I read those feelings of the heart and I love to dance and  could imasgine the moonlight romance

Hope

2islander2
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10 posted 2009-05-01 05:35 AM


Hi Bill, nicely done, of course there is music, but music is the tip of iceberg called emotions. Thank you for sharing.

yann

Chalmette Guy
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11 posted 2009-05-01 08:51 AM


Music is the food of life.
It is the one constant thread throughout my life, I enjoyed your words on the subject.
I could not live, or write, without music.
I like how you brought in a love and yearning for a special someone also.

"hold me closer for I am weakening..."

LindsayP
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12 posted 2009-05-01 10:53 PM



Don't weaken too much Bill, you might get into trouble and we don't want that do we.

My wife and I both love music and in our younger years we loved to dance as well.
Enjoyed your post mate. Take care.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2009-05-01 11:32 PM


HopeS - feelings of the heart will span oceans for romance and one dance with you...

2islander2 - yes, I believe also your thoughts about music, brings many emotions with it...

Chalmette Guy - I love music also with its many feelings, especially the blues, just my nature inside I believe.

LindsayP - I can't help but weaken and get into trouble, especially with a special someone. I'm glad you and the wife like music, and had a good time dancing in your younger years. Take care, and stay well...

BC

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