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A Sense Of Spring.
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A Sense Of Spring. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Aloft, clouds shadowed, reflected onto ink rippled waters, bleached white, shifting shapes. Warm, yet breeze cooled air refreshing, bearing distant kites, transmuted to gulls overhead,plaining sedately. Awakened trees, tiny virescent buds;amber, serene blue, yoke yellow, cerise wild flowers, topping long emerald tongue tips of broad bladed bejewelled grass, lustrous. Carried on springs breath, newly arrived whitethroat song,joining the joy of birds excitement of the new season still to come. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
especially fine (impressionistic) Spring/Summer imagery! a GREAT joy to read... I am particularly fond of: "...clouds shadowed, reflected onto ink" AND: "...cooled air refreshing, bearing distant kites, transmuted to gulls overhead,plaining sedately." MUCH (long-sustained) applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Phil!!! You're back! What a pleasant surprise! You have painted a veritable rainbow with this poetic spring surprise!  Happy spring hug!  Linda  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful images... and on this dreary day, I appreciate them all! *S* Welcome back! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goldenrose - a'hhhh spring, all of this and more, nice write... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice to see you back, Phil, and in fine form, I see. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Awakened trees, tiny virescent buds;amber, serene blue, yoke yellow, cerise wild flowers, topping long emerald tongue tips of broad bladed bejewelled grass, lustrous." Such gorgeous visual scenery, Phil. I always enjoy your ability to write the colors of nature. More, please. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A beautiful spring day, so lovely, peaceful, full of color and life, I could use more of these days~ nice to see your happy thoughts, across these pages! HAPPY SPRING! ~ARH  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this paints such a lovely picture...your imagery is powerfully well done |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
glad to see this fine 'write' back near the top of the "P.I.P.-land" queue for awhile! continuing applause for this 'pennning' ! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
back for another 'read' ... gotta love those: irescent buds ... cerise wild flowers and that: bejewelled, lustrous grass. extended applause !! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Spring, sigh  ARCTIC WIND |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You convey the blue sky in all it's splendor, the flower beds in full bloom, and the promise of Spring time dancing in the wind. Excellent poem, Goldenrose. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you to all who took time to reply.... Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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