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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-04-27 07:39 AM


I slipped my hand over sun mouth afternoons
and heard your belly moan it's love sounds
as if your skin ends knew inside my mind
and wore my fingers as a glover's touch

you were on somewhere else mountain in crowds
but your gown was lonely colored with wine
that spilled from your eyes when you laughed
and felt how your wings were heavy freedoms

you tied your ankles to my wrists with glances
and writhed as such a lovely dancer
biting my lips with your kiss candy coating
leaving saliva colored blood to heal my wounds

we waited for our dawn to be the jailor
that locked us outside the prison of the hearts
confining us to just that carnal laboring
that would free our souls with it's panting

and just in time tea would be our salvation


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[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-27-2009 11:27 AM).]

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suthern
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1 posted 2009-04-27 11:08 AM


but your gown was lonely colored with wine
that spilled from your eyes when you laughed

What an incredible image! *S* I like this very much! *S*

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-04-27 11:10 AM


quote:
you were on somewhere else mountain in crowds
but your gown was lonely colored with wine
that spilled from your eyes when you laughed
and felt how your wings were heavy freedoms



This is incredibly creative language, dear D.! Exciting like a ride on Russian mountains.

Fantastic.

Love,
Margherita  

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-04-27 11:25 AM


ms suthern, thanks lady friend for the touch..

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ms mar, thank you for your window eye view here

unboundpoetess
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4 posted 2009-04-27 05:14 PM


Slow brewed, sweet, and soft sipped.

And with ice, as is befitting a proper southern girl.

Heather

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-04-27 07:40 PM


Ms Heythere' thanks for the slippery slick segue smile.
Indigo
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6 posted 2009-04-27 10:23 PM


it was the proper
she forgot when earl grey smiled
with slowly bared hands.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-04-27 10:37 PM


ms indi...

I knew you would have earl along
but what is wrong with a 3some?
thanks babe

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