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Hollowed By Darkness......(rp For Earth Angel)
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Hollowed By Darkness......(rp For Earth Angel) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 Hollowed By Darkness Darkness fills her mind as everything inside is empty. Alone in silence, she suffers -- paying for her sins. Along the shore, crows circle around her in endless flocks -- blocking out the moon. Slowly she sheds a tear that slips into the ocean in silence. No love is left inside of her soul and heart for she is hollowed by Darkness. ARCTIC WIND Life isn't just given to you Life is about Creating it ...... -Arctic Wind |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! Arctic! I never knew you had a dark side, with all those happy inspirational poems! It is great, when a poet can write both happiness and saddness... Beautiful, dark poem! ~ARH |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Pictures are worth a thousand words ... although you've managed to capture the moment quite well  Rex |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your talent is showing Arctic Wind, Lovely picture too. Ida |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Good one Michael. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This is a great one Artic Wind. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I remember this, dear Michael. It is indeed so powerful and we all have such moments. You caught this so well! Bravo! Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Slowly she sheds a tear that slips into the ocean in silence. Somber, sad... and superb! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear ARCTIC, you are a fantabulous young poet ~ Actually, you are a fantabulous poet for any age! I love your work ~ regardless of genre.  You certainly know how to create an atmosphere with your illustrative pen! ~ be it on nature, the fairy realm ~ or dark. Loved it!  EA |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Love it, darkness in this is so described well Lana |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When I saw that this dark beauty was bounced back up, I just had to read it again! I have enjoyed the dark poems that were inspired by me writing outside the box, as it were. This one by you, dear ARCTIC, was especially surprising! ~ and FANTASTIC!!!  EA |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Artic, This is dark but beautiful, thanks for the enjoyable work. yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I find it amazing how the dark lines can be so beautiful when expressed like this. Well done! Eric |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A Romantic Heart, doesn't everyone have a little dark side. I think so! LOL Well, why thank you for all those wonderful words. Surely, you brightened up this poem. ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Rex ~ Thanks!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marchmadness! Really! thanks, that means a lot. ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lindsay, thanks dear friend. Your writing is wonderful as well. ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Suncleaver, thanks for your kind words. ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita, thank you! Your words always put a smile on my face. And I'm sure on others as well. ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Suthern, thanks Pip friend. to youARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Earth Angel!!!! Thank you! When I noticed that people were following after you, writing dark poetry, I decided to give this one to ya. Hope you like! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Dark Star, thank you! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Islander, thanks!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JamesMichael! Thanks friend!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EA & Ethome, thanks again! ARCTIC WIND |
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