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Hollowed By Darkness......(rp For Earth Angel)

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Artic Wind
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Hollowed By Darkness

Darkness fills her mind as everything inside is empty.
Alone in silence, she suffers -- paying for her sins.
Along the shore, crows circle around her in endless flocks
-- blocking out the moon.
Slowly she sheds a tear that slips into the ocean in silence.
No love is left inside of her soul and heart
for she is hollowed by Darkness.

ARCTIC WIND

Life isn't just given to you
Life is about Creating it   ......
-Arctic Wind

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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 04-26-2009 03:56 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

WOW! Arctic! I never knew you had a dark side, with all those happy inspirational poems!

It is great, when a poet can write both happiness and saddness...

Beautiful, dark poem!

~ARH
Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 04-26-2009 04:19 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Pictures are worth a thousand words ... although you've managed to capture the moment quite well

Rex
Marchmadness
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3 posted 04-26-2009 04:49 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Your talent is showing Arctic Wind, Lovely picture too.
                                  Ida
LindsayP
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4 posted 04-26-2009 09:26 PM       View Profile for LindsayP   Email LindsayP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LindsayP


Good one Michael.
Suncleaver
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5 posted 04-26-2009 10:09 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

This is a great one Artic Wind.
Margherita
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6 posted 04-27-2009 05:23 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I remember this, dear Michael. It is indeed so powerful and we all have such moments. You caught this so well! Bravo!

Love,
Margherita
suthern
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7 posted 04-27-2009 10:57 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Slowly she sheds a tear that slips into the ocean in silence.

Somber, sad... and superb! *S*
Earth Angel
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8 posted 04-27-2009 11:07 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Dear ARCTIC, you are a fantabulous young poet ~ Actually, you are a fantabulous poet for any age! I love your work ~ regardless of genre.

You certainly know how to create an atmosphere with your illustrative pen! ~ be it on nature, the fairy realm ~ or dark.

Loved it!


EA
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9 posted 05-07-2009 10:17 AM       View Profile for Dark Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Star

Love it, darkness in this is so described well


Lana
Earth Angel
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When I saw that this dark beauty was bounced back up, I just had to read it again! I have enjoyed the dark poems that were inspired by me writing outside the box, as it were.
This one by you, dear ARCTIC, was especially surprising! ~ and FANTASTIC!!!


EA
2islander2
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11 posted 05-07-2009 01:15 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Hello Artic,
This is dark but beautiful, thanks for the enjoyable work.

yann
JamesMichael
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12 posted 05-07-2009 07:23 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Fine writing...James
ethome
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I find it amazing how the dark lines can be so beautiful when expressed like this.
Well done!

Eric
Artic Wind
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14 posted 09-03-2009 05:59 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

A Romantic Heart, doesn't everyone have a little dark side. I think so! LOL Well, why thank you for all those wonderful words. Surely, you brightened up this poem.


ARCTIC WIND
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Rex ~ Thanks!!!!


ARCTIC WIND
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Marchmadness! Really! thanks, that means a lot.


ARCTIC WIND
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Lindsay, thanks dear friend. Your writing is wonderful as well.


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Suncleaver,

thanks for your kind words.


ARCTIC WIND
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Margherita, thank you! Your words always put a smile on my face. And I'm sure on others as well.


ARCTIC WIND
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Suthern, thanks Pip friend.

to you
ARCTIC WIND
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Earth Angel!!!! Thank you! When I noticed that people were following after you, writing dark poetry, I decided to give this one to ya. Hope you like!


ARCTIC WIND
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Dark Star, thank you!


ARCTIC WIND
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Islander, thanks!!


ARCTIC WIND
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JamesMichael!

Thanks friend!!


ARCTIC WIND
 
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