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Martie
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0 posted 2009-04-24 12:40 PM


I am a load of minutes,
heavy with wonder
at the clarity of just one.
Perhaps it comes at noon
on a day just as lunch sounds good
and the birds are snoozing from morning's song.  

Perhaps it moves along the sidewalk,
leashed and exuberant,
wanting to be unchained;
jumping and wild ...
a rabid thing gone to joy.

I see how the load is less
and the forgotten cast off,
as dust performs a miracle
and covers the unused things
until they change.  

Sudden insights insist ...
listen to me;
softly the appreciation of little things
grabs hold and gives to movement, meaning
... so many times now
that the spirit comes
from behind the silent silk of time
and takes a bow.  

I've known the power of listening
and now see the wonder of being understood.  

What is this willful character of celebration?  
It is dressed in wildflowers
and recalls the grace of wind.
It is a blade of grass
gone green from spring,
and the turbulence of snow-melt
racing summer to the sea.
It is hills of yellow mustard
in the morning sun.

It is me.
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I would like to repost this every year, because it will remain true.  I appreciate the love and support given to me by my pip friends and family during my seizure and brain surgery three years ago.  I would like you to celebrate life with me, again.     Much love to all!  


© Copyright 2009 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-04-24 12:52 PM


Oh am I excited to be first, as this is my absolute favorite of yours, and you know that you are my absolute favorite!  Yes, it surely is you.

Happy Anniversary Martie!

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

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2 posted 2009-04-24 12:56 PM


"What is this willful character of celebration?  
It is dressed in wildflowers
and recalls the grace of wind.
It is a blade of grass
gone green from spring,
and the turbulence of snow-melt
racing summer to the sea.
It is hills of yellow mustard
in the morning sun.

It is me."

~ Yes, it is YOU!

Happy Anniversary, Martie Flowers!
May there be many more to follow!

Be well! Be happy! Be you!


Linda

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2009-04-24 01:49 PM


Oh Martie ... this is so beautiful, so flowing, so utterly descriptive ...

and so "you".

Loved this.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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4 posted 2009-04-24 02:08 PM


Martie,  although I have only been on PIP for a short time, I am so glad to have hade the opportunity to get to know a lot of you and enjoyed your poems,  Including this one.

This is absolutely beautiful,  I will look forward to reading it again next year.

Happy Springtime.
Tracey.

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5 posted 2009-04-24 03:43 PM


This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read...anywhere. ~library keeper~

I have tears reading this, but they are of sheer joy and appreciation of your heart and spirit, and your superior poetic talent.
Your recovery is amazing, your words are inspirational.

xxxx,Kacy



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6 posted 2009-04-25 10:25 AM


Isn't it amazing
how we celebrate certain
anniversaries...

especially so those which
scared the you-know-what
out of us.




latearrival
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7 posted 2009-04-25 12:08 PM


Martie, you have out done your self in this. And that is hard to do.You write so flowingly of nature and beauty as seen and heard from some one who knows. Thank you for this one. latearrival
Magnus
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8 posted 2009-04-25 12:14 PM


Hi Martie dear...your touch remains silk...
sheer and svelte...Take care of yourselves.

LindsayP
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9 posted 2009-04-25 10:43 PM



and the turbulence of snow-melt
racing summer to the sea.
It is hills of yellow mustard
in the morning sun.

It is me.

A very thought provoking poem my dear,
much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2009-04-25 10:53 PM


Martie - love to you dear one, and stay well...

BC

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2009-04-26 06:29 AM


Always wonderful to read your words and to know you are doing well.  There is much to be grateful for.


M

critical mass
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12 posted 2009-04-26 08:40 PM


Well I'm definately a fan of this.

I see how the load is less
and the forgotten cast off,
as dust performs a miracle
and covers the unused things
until they change.  



Margherita
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13 posted 2009-04-27 06:23 AM


I do want to celebrate with you, dear Martie. This is simply outstanding and fantastic. Your healing is such a blessing to all of us.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

icebox
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14 posted 2009-04-27 07:15 AM


Very glad you are still with us.



OwlSA
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15 posted 2009-04-27 03:23 PM


Three years already!  It seems like just the other day!  I am so grateful for the miracles that restored your health so wonderfully.  Thank you for your thanks to us all.  You have gone through such a lot, and are still the wonderful Martie flower that you always were!  What a wonderful Martie-thought to post this every year!  

Owl

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