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rad802
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0 posted 2009-04-24 12:17 PM



Testing
by Rick Delmonico

Reasons revolve and lightly touched they softly shimmer
Monumental precepts to oasis
Thoughtlessly the will dissolves the tiny fortunes
And returns to darkened alleys, ergo stasis

Hollow impetus ignores the light of dawn
The waking lingers as it blends the last sensations
Fast forward till the evening stars are drawn
Bleeding out before us, shifting constellations

Some hurt removed the restless pace of silent living
Indulgent injuries becoming less neglected
Blindly lust perfumed anonymous occasions
Preferred but never valued or expected

Every time power's converted, power's wasted
Everyone tries to imagine they can cope
Any time someone abandons what they've tasted
Opportunity is leaving less to hope

Rick Delmonico

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WTBAKELAR
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1 posted 2009-04-24 02:29 PM


Rick,  interesting write.  
Makes me think about what I have started and never finished writi..........

OOps,
Tracey.

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-04-27 05:13 AM


quote:
Hollow impetus ignores the light of dawn
The waking lingers as it blends the last sensations
Fast forward till the evening stars are drawn
Bleeding out before us, shifting constellations



Powerful lines.

Never allow hope to fade.

Love,
Margherita

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