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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-04-22 07:26 PM


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Yes
The rumors
Have been confirmed

Dorothy
With her neurotic dog
Are once again
Back in town

There’s no bunting
On the streets

Everyone here
With wary eyes
Are simply keeping low

While all the bucks
Are ready to run
At the sight
Of crimson shoes


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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (04-22-2009 08:20 PM).]

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-04-22 09:32 PM


Yo John,

I think you've hit the nail on the head.

Bobby

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