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i_am_patch!
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since 2008-06-24
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manila, philippines

0 posted 2009-04-21 04:18 PM



"STUCK IN A MOMENT"
avmatias


SUN--with all my heart i write to you a wishful thought,
with hopes that wherever part of the sky you maybe, you find happiness,
and as for me-- i will remain here in my rightful sky, thinking of you..


I first met in summer..

can you tell me why im feeling this way,
what is the reason of my pain?
is it my heart that's breaking,
and tearing me apart..

if the Wind only blew the other way--
if we only found each other at the right time,
if i can go back and rearrange
every moment of my life
maybe then,

we can freely fall inlove..

II parted in May

what was it that i saw in your eyes?
why was it so taunting? still haunting me..
who is she who toook you away from me?
the one who now owns the place beside you i have longed for.

if only we never ended this way--
if we can only go back in time,
if we could just freeze each moment that we choose to,
maybe then,

we'll always be together..

III trying to move on

why did'nt you ever held my hands?
could'nt you understand the reason of my confusion?
was it because i tried too much--
while you were never so willing to compromise?

if i can only walk your way,
if i can trace your memories in time
if we were only stuck in a moment--
maybe then, only then,

i may tell you what im feeling..

"it is such a secret place--the land of tears.." (the little prince)

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-04-21 04:27 PM


i_am_patch! - a lost love, perhaps one day to be reunited. Nice write...

BC

rad802
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since 2008-04-19
Posts 279
KY U.S.A.
2 posted 2009-04-21 09:17 PM


I have felt this way many, many times.
They are distant memeories for me now.
the things I've lost, they were all replaced.
We should dare to hope,
for love.

Rick Delmonico

WTBAKELAR
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since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089
Utah, USA
3 posted 2009-04-21 09:30 PM


A very wise person told me once;  A relationship is like a carton of milk in the fridge,  once it goes bad, you throw it out.  You can not put it back in and make it get better.
Go get a new carton of milk.

Tracey

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