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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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You want that I should pencil in a circle making blunt the spin dizzy-dancing-oh-my-eyes just by asking me to sin by answering your questioning: Are you happy? Yes, I am and I have no proof of this but the fact that I still dance when two saxophones entrance me from chairs I have sat in-- Am I happy? Do I grin? Watch me as I laugh and spin like a child that got caught in your super-sated smuglet-tin captured in the net of guile. I am damned oblivious to your eyes, obsequiesque-- wings of planes become my arms! I am a helicopter-song: rrrrrrat-tat-tat-and wrong again Are you happy Yes. I am. Now you want me to defend myself, because I am? I've had reasons that I thought should prevent me from what ought to be a state of natural-- Am I happy? Am I not? I'm dancing in the dew of mend glistening upon the lawn watching the sun rise again wishing I'd worn a tu-tu...out laughing in the pink of dawn wishing you were here... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Are you happy Yes. I am. Now you want me to defend myself, because I am?" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "laughing in the pink of dawn wishing you were here... " so love this  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm dancing in the dew of mend glistening upon the lawn watching the sun rise again wishing I'd worn a tu-tu...out laughing in the pink of dawn wishing you were here... You don't even know how brilliant you are, do you? From a title that entices and exhilerates to an ending that touches in so many ways... you make me want to follow you around, hoping you'll drop some of that talent and I can whisk it away. *G* |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Glorious, every drop of this. Heather |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
you make me dizzy in your talent ..kind regards Boshii2 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Am I happy? Am I not?" ...this is the best answer, I believe, that could ever be framed to this universal question...well done, m'lady, well done |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Glad you have happy feet dear. Or do you not? Great stuff, I enjoyed this. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I hope you're happy because I surely am after reading this. Dance even though it may rain. Your happy footprints are in my heart. God bless, Rae |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
great poem.. Makes me dizzy to read it. did it not? CM |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all, very much. This was inspired by a question from Essorant, so I must give credit where it is due.  I have so much to be grateful for, and please trust that all of you are included in the "much".  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - a most compelling write, well done, well versed, and enjoyed... BC |
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