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wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
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0 posted 2009-04-20 10:50 PM


ive searched and wandered
thought in wonder...
how could it be
ive fallen for you
i still like others
but i feel ive been tethered
and keep coming back around so i guess ive surrendered
im hooked on you
with nothing to do
so i guess all i have to say is...
i love you

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-04-21 02:00 PM


wolfy09 - enjoyed your write, nice work...

BC

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-04-21 02:42 PM


Sounds like you are in love! ~ so you might as well say, "I love you".


EA

Boshii2
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since 2009-02-01
Posts 146

3 posted 2009-04-21 11:41 PM


sigh
Boshii2

wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
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4 posted 2009-04-22 10:00 PM


thanks for reading you guys. i dont really think im in love but i felt like writing something sweet for a change.
jademartin
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since 2009-04-23
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5 posted 2009-04-23 06:40 AM


In the dawn of a morning,
In a time before the light..

So comfortably by each others side,
With arms wrapped neatly upon each another,
And our love lit alike a roman candle burning in the night..

Awakening,
I watch you sleep ever so quietly..

Softly kissing you upon your face,
You awaken with a smile so beautiful,
You send a warming shiver through my body.

Helping you to your feet and taking your hand,
We walk through the sleepless wind,
To the tree top of a hill

Upon the hill top stands a blossom tree,
A blossom tree representing the growth of our love..

The thousands of blossom tree leaves,
Each represents a reason why I love you..

Your eyes as stunning as the moon,
Which sparkle and shine alike a million overhanging stars in the midnight sky

Your smile so sweet and charming,
It just makes me feel so lucky..

Your personality,
So unique and content

Your forgiveness,
So strong and willing..

Your patients,
So perfectionate and true..

So we stand hand in hand,
Reading the reasons of why we love each another...


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2009-04-25 07:11 PM


Enjoyed...James
wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
Posts 93

7 posted 2009-04-28 09:38 PM


thank you everyone for reading
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