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Suncleaver
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0 posted 2009-04-20 09:27 PM


I love she whispered 'Come to me',
'Forever mine, I draw you near',
'Our time will come and you will see',
'I am the one that holds you dear'.

I took her hand and followed close
To water's edge where she lay down,
I held her tight in passion's throes
And lips enclosed, her cries I drowned.

We share our words, we share our breath,
Our rivers mingle strong and deep,
We lay until the dawn of death,
Her heart is mine alone to keep.


When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2009-04-20 10:44 PM


Fine writing...James
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2009-04-20 10:46 PM


very romantic!
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2009-04-21 01:56 AM


her heart is yours to keep~

~ARH

A nice little gift before I go to bed!

Thank you for your tender thoughts and love~


My love, in dreams entice my heart to rise
On silver wings o'er oceans cold spray
That I might find your arms, forever stay~Luke

Eirian
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4 posted 2009-04-21 02:06 AM


Beautiful as always Luke.

I left you a message on MSN regarding what we spoke about.

steavenr
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5 posted 2009-04-21 12:37 PM


"I held her tight in passion's throes
And lips enclosed, her cries I drowned."

...great lines...rooted deeply in romance...excellent write

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2009-04-21 01:03 PM


Suncleaver - nice passionate write...

BC

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-04-21 02:38 PM


You whisper the sweetest love poems, Luke.


Linda

LindsayP
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8 posted 2009-04-22 12:03 PM



Great poem Luke

Very romantic and readable.

Lindsay

suthern
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9 posted 2009-04-22 12:57 PM


Beautifully romantic! *S*
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2009-04-22 03:02 PM


mmmm...had to come back for a second
helping of your love~



~ARH

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