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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2009-04-20 12:12 PM

God has punished me.
Married for the wrong reasons.
And now I'm pregnant.

Husband unemployed.
Trailer trash with a garden
growing only hate.

Lazy and worthless,
you reap what you sow I guess.
Let me take the place

of someone who is about to die.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-04-20 12:16 PM

Yo dear Passing shadows,

Well now you have something to look forward to Hon.

You'll love the kid. That's where the best kids come from.

Love Bobby

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2009-04-20 12:20 PM

yeah Bobby, sure I will, but from prison I suppose

Bones ain't got nothin' on me now

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-04-20 09:56 PM

growing only hate.

Ah, but lady... I know the love that's within you... it survives no matter how tough the times and it will have its day... I pray that comes soon!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-04-20 10:41 PM

Strong words from your heart...James

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

5 posted 2009-04-21 05:34 AM

This is heartbreaking writing. Need some positive thoughts and strength to walk through these phases. Stay positive.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2009-04-21 12:47 PM

passing shadows - dang, sorry to hear about what is going on, wishing you the best...

BC

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2009-04-21 03:02 PM

Gosh, Dixie ~ If it doesn't rain ~ it pours! Please remember that every cloud truly does have a silver lining! Even though it may not be apparent until some time later.

Take care! ~ of yourself and your unborn baby.

Linda

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2009-04-21 05:41 PM

maybe you should take a more positive attitude? it's rather heartbreaking how you speak of your life and husband....and honestly, not fair to hear....JMHO

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-21-2009 10:02 PM).]

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

9 posted 2009-04-21 06:15 PM

Pouring resentment and anger onto the page is therapy. I'll read as long as you want to write.

Sometimes the world just seems harsh and ugly and it feels good to spill ink.

Good write.
Heather

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

10 posted 2009-04-21 10:23 PM

Dear Dixie, I feel so sorry for you, that you are in that state of mind. Believe me

dear lady, things are never as bad as they seem, and when you hold your baby in your

arms, the love you will feel will banish the hate that envelopes you at this moment.

Life is to short to carry hate in your heart and if you can eradicate those soul

destroying feelings from within, you will be a much happier person, without fail.
Love to you dear friend. Good luck.

Lindsay

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