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Open Poetry #44

Thin black line

critical mass
Member

since 2009-03-25

Posts 275
Michigan

0 posted 2009-04-20 05:53 AM

I followed the thin black line
like a magnetic promise
that tugged on the small bits of steel
left in my eyes from battles
with razor tongue women
in stiletto heels.
I followed it from the parking lot
into the grocery isles
and watched as it ran down her leg
and disappeared
into her take-me-home pumps.
When she turned around
I put my safety glasses on-
opposites attract
and I was ready for the next battle.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2009-04-20 07:21 AM

Dang, gotta watch those runners... lol..."take me home pumps"

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2009-04-20 01:22 PM

enjoyed. latearrival

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-04-20 05:37 PM

like a magnetic promise
that tugged on the small bits of steel
left in my eyes from battles
with razor tongue women
in stiletto heels.

Loved this! *S* So vivid... excellent!

critical mass
Member

since 2009-03-25

Posts 275
Michigan

4 posted 2009-04-20 09:49 PM

ThisDiamond

latearrival

suthern

Hose with the lines up the back don't last long in this house.

Thank you all for the replies.

CM

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