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vandana
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0 posted 2009-04-19 06:28 PM





Remember (To Remember)

To the one I love
To the one I love
To move on
To one broken heart
It is just love
It is just simple life
To move on
Now I am here
To remember you
Life is short and bittersweet
Just loving you
isn't enough
It is time to move on now
But I just remember to remember
I love you more than ever
I will always remember you
To remember you


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-04-19 06:38 PM


Yo dear Vandana,

You've expressed a very nice thought in this poem.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2009-04-19 07:54 PM


vandana - you have expressed many nice thoughts in this writing...

BC

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3 posted 2009-04-19 08:42 PM


"But I just remember to remember
I love you more than ever
I will always remember you"



so beautiful
loved this...

Prasad Nataraj
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4 posted 2009-04-20 08:34 AM


Well expressed Vandana

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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