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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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of gingerbread sand I would imagine her sighs under indigo sky she would bard her gauzery into fig newton filling and could I peel her shell without her core becoming the docile ravenous that stitched my tongue to hyphenate her love sounds I took the time too sudden perhaps to hurry her onto the saddle of my stallion's wanting leather but now she is in pale precision thigh highed a galloping frenzy in blind folded jewelry breaking her bracelets on my face side biology and there will be no tomorrow like tomorrow two drinks into heaven to ruin her new dress and unravel the thread she keeps her heart on lest it remain hidden among a riders memories and her womb becomes but the fireman's drum will a rabid sun bless our sinful combination to bare her wound to the stoneman's healing will the dancers of eyes line our highway and undulate their curving fingered ends around the shovel handled shapes of embers lest just the sun is not enough for our heatred ______________ daark (forbidden) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and unravel the thread she keeps her heart on lest it remain hidden among a riders memories" loved this part....  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
what a poem for a friday... woohoooo~~**~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Lauren..you have such a cute woohoo, thanks babe |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
she presses the pause....... less to stir the stallion, than the mundane must of life but returns to feast never quite sated your words do whip-up a hunger for more 'specially after not seeing them for a while |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nymph...oh I do love the sound of you being hungry...thanks babe |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
I love the thought of stitching the tongue to hyphenate love sounds: masterful. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks Os' |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
appetite whetted she rises, wearing his skin wind-whipped and lathered. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi... I do love how you rise like a soft sinned muffin waiting to be devoured |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lovely write, with such an interesting line: "lest just the sun is not enough for our heatred" ...please tell me that the last word is a collaborative creation between you and creativity and not a typo...please..... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr...it is intentional..thanks guy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and unravel the thread she keeps her heart on To say you have a way with words is to set a new standard for understatement. *S* Loved this!!! |
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