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Poor Pop
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Poor Pop |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I like To smoke my pipe In warm rooms Preferably My own home This is a pleasure The father I love Was finally not allowed I remember Him at the end Sitting alone By the garage Which may Then explain Why after he’s gone I never visit My mother . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, That's a shame about that. I'd be one to cut Mom some slack. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
How very sad for all of you. And The strange thing is I understand everyone's point of view. Ida |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Liked this quite a bit. A personal touch I think. |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
perfect little poem pity about the mum..just when you need each other |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
god this hits home like you wouldn't believe! *sigh* I miss my Dad so much...I called him Pop.  |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
There's more than a pipe in this poem, and that's why it touches me. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Resentment steals too much from life. Juju -Juju |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Resentment steals too much from life." what a great response, Juju. M |
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