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from tea to eternity |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she was making some kind of tea with foam and I wondered how it would feel on your lips with a kiss or two afterwards perhaps you said you might be living on kisses now as if they were your favorite health food and you were trying to be good badly I offered my hand and then my hands to you to see if I could warm your chill inside them you almost did put them on too, slowly but then took them off again more quickly and said you didn't want anything on at all except my eyes for awhile and would I mind wearing the rest of you then, perhaps forever after _________________ daark (forbidden) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh my! y'got me all hungry ... and stuff.  (and stuff) nods and winks *stuff*  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i think kissing should be a second language that we use fluently and interchangeable with breath |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene..I so much your stuff..thanks babe!! ______________ ms slick, they should be one and the same yes...thank you special friend |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
steaming! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
raindance...thank you |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...oh, my... this is so cool: "you said you might be living on kisses now as if they were your favorite health food and you were trying to be good badly" another amazing offering...very nicely done |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr, thanks amigo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't pick a favorite part because I love every line! *S* Living on kisses... sign me up for THAT diet... please! LOL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..10/4 got you signed up and you are first in line..thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, I love this in its whole, from the title to the last syllable. Kissing IS the best health diet no doubt. No need of compensation sweets ... This stirs fantasies of long kissy nights ... Delightful! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend..you smile me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hmmmm... made me want to feel those hands and made me remember my forgotten tea in the other room. It's cooled off but your poetry warms me. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks james.. _______________ thanks ms ali-san, you smile me |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks lady! |
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