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PrestonThePoet
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0 posted 2009-04-15 09:58 PM


Thoughts of you
Convulse through closed eyes.
Feelings breaking my composure;
Sighs turn to sobs.
Pure emotion leaks out,
Exposing moments of honesty;
And regret.
Leaving you wanting more,
Once it had all been taken away.

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2009-04-17 07:06 PM


Enjoyed...James
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with you
2 posted 2009-04-17 08:10 PM


this aches...

and you expressed it well

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-04-18 01:37 PM


Oh, Preston, I found this catching my own breath as well! Very raw! ~ Very real!

Sending a warm hug your way,

Linda

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Gaia
4 posted 2009-04-18 01:39 PM


Feeling heartache in this write.
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