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Ferric Oxide
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Ferric Oxide |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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We can’t seem to resist the attraction Forces work to bring together Opposites built up in abstraction Forging the ties that will not sever The closer we are, the force is too much The pull becomes too hard to stop Inexorable towards each other’s touch We resist and deny until we drop Descending into the other’s gravity Orbiting in ever tighter spiral This pull has an entire hold on me Diseased and contagious viral The strength is failing, for us to fight Getting harder the nearer we come Sun setting on us on this velvet night Finally we give in and join as one |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
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"The closer we are, the force is too much The pull becomes too hard to stop Inexorable towards each other’s touch We resist and deny until we drop" this rocks my socks  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
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I love the concepts this write portrays...really liked this part: "Descending into the other’s gravity Orbiting in ever tighter spiral" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Magnetism has never been written better! *S* (I almost said it's never been written "more beautifully" but "Diseased and contagious viral" made me rethink. LOL) Most excellent write! *S* |
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