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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I would always imagine you that way topless or at least convertible comfortable and the sun making those smiles you get when the warm feels better than his touch although you say he loves you sometimes noticeably for the reasons of possession we played with the sound of each other hands lacing fingers between the other's like they were long legged people dancing we thought of some other things too and said we should do them sometime soon before our hands got too tired to hold on you wanted to take a nap and wondered if I would mind you sleeping alone that way and I wondered if you being in my dreams still met the qualification of being alone you smiled and handed me some of your love words but said you would want them all back again later along with some of mine with additional interest ________________ daark (forbidden) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
*sigh* I will never tire reading your beautiful work Mr Daark... never!  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
I see this is close on your 10,000 post. Stranger, you must have a library of quality poetry here. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms r/b. Thanks lady friend. ___________ Osprey, thanks for the read. They say when I get to 10K, I will have used up all my words and thoughts and my pen will become quiet..perhaps it will be a blessing. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - your poetry is magnificent, when you do get to 10,000 please keep writing... BC |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
no don't ever stop writing for at times i wear your words next to my sheets at night |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Bill..thanks amigo..my pen will keep going as long as there are dreams left in me.. __________________ ms slick, you just made my pen puddle..thank you for that image.. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in a secret jar he was chinese medicine; a salve for her wounds. Indigo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your [forbidden] is like spring's first smell of forsythia, or jasmine. quote: beautiful imagery. It makes one think they are right there, in a very special place. Kudos. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi....even water is medicine to the thirsty mouth? thanks babe ________________ ms sun, thank you for observing the forbidden fruit |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Great images. Excellent writing. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"we played with the sound of each other hands lacing fingers between the other's" loved it all, but this line really stood out...cool write |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this is my absolute favorite of yours! I loved this part, as I am sure more than one person has felt this, and you captured it so well. when the warm feels better than his touch although you say he loves you sometimes noticeably for the reasons of possession Carpe' Diem, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
vandan, thanks so much _____________ CM, thanks for the read!! ___________________ steavenr, thanks amigo _________________ ms myst...thanks so much lady friend |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Mmmm... Dark??? You do know we're gonna reset the counter on you, right? LOL Can't have you getting to 10000 if you think that's your pass out of writing wonderful poems! *S* I wondered if you being in my dreams still met the qualification of being alone you smiled and handed me some of your love words but said you would want them all back again later along with some of mine with additional interest For words like this, I'd put you back at junior member status in a heartbeat. *G* Fantastic!! |
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Rosie_Orange Junior Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 46South Africa |
beautiful, simply beautiful |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern....on no..junior? you can put me anywhere you wish babe, thanks ____________ Rosie O..thanks so much and welcome to the blue zoo tunes |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, there is something really sensous about napping with someone special. I didn't just capture that thought in this poem, but that one danced above my head. I carry special moments in my naps. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: One of those that make me almost squeak in pleasure! Must have been busy when you posted this. Happy that I found it! What's that talking about the limit of 10.000? May the river of dreams never dry out! I just know it will not dry out, period. Think of the books! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe _______________ ms mar...thanks lady friend...was just kidding about the 10K...someone told me that once.. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"and I wondered if you being in my dreams still met the qualification of being alone" ..sure as hell feels like it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K...it does sometimes huh..thanks ms |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
.....long fingered, convertable, afternoon nap taking, car handled bedroomed door type coffee smelling women of California, beware. Nice D. Love ya stuff xxxx |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms spudd'...no warning signs needed...thanks babe |
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